You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a family for six months and look after their six year old child Write a letter to the parents In your letter Explain why you would like the job give details of why you would

Essay topics:

You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a family

for six months and look after their six- year-old child.

Write a letter to the parents. In your letter

- Explain why you would like the job

- give details of why you would be a suitable person to employ

- say how you would spend your free time while you are in Australia

Dear Parents,
I am writing here on your advertisement advertised on ABC magazine regarding look after six year old
child.
I like to spend time with children it is a my passion. Further, I would like to engaged with different
culture background families and share experience. In addition, this will allow me to work in Australia,
which was my dream.
Furthermore, currently lived in Sri Lanka and I have already completed the childcaring diploma course in
Sri Lanka in English medium which is conducted by British education center. It was fulltime course and
conducted by foreign academic staff. Moreover, I have experience in childcaring for 5 years in UAE and I
have left from there when he is in year 10 as they don’t want to carry out my service anymore.
Spending time with 6 year child is a high responsibility task as he is in active age. However with my
experience I am sure that, I can managed and I can make my time effectively. Further, if I have free time,
i would like to introduce traditional Sri Lankan foods to you all.
I am looking for the good response soon.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'child' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'children'.
Suggestion: children
...zine regarding look after six year old child. I like to spend time with children it...
^^^^^
Line 4, column 42, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'a' or 'my'?
Suggestion: a; my
... like to spend time with children it is a my passion. Further, I would like to engag...
^^^^
Line 11, column 27, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'child' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'children'.
Suggestion: children
...ice anymore. Spending time with 6 year child is a high responsibility task as he is ...
^^^^^
Line 11, column 86, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...onsibility task as he is in active age. However with my experience I am sure that, I c...
^^^^^^^
Line 12, column 34, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'manage'
Suggestion: manage
...th my experience I am sure that, I can managed and I can make my time effectively. Fur...
^^^^^^^
Line 13, column 1, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ctively. Further, if I have free time, i would like to introduce traditional Sri...
^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, look, moreover, regarding, so, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 910.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 192.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73958333333 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85401459449 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635416666667 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 287.1 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.8096829308 44.8134815571 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.7272727273 76.5299724578 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4545454545 16.8248392259 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.18181818182 4.34317383033 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 11.0 4.29896907216 256% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223810804633 0.216113520407 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0776278433132 0.0766984524023 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0692517482257 0.0603063233224 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0808576992742 0.12726935374 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.068947710228 0.0580467560999 119% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 8.37731958763 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 8.71597938144 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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