Young people today are often less polite and show less respect than previous generations. Why do you think this is? What can be done to solve this problem?
Generation to generation attitudes are changing with the effect of nature and the environmental changes who lived in. Nowadays it can be seen that, youngsters are often less polite and respect than our early generations and negatively impact on social wellbeing. In this essay, will discuss about the reasons and some solutions for the above matter.
With the generation X, who born in early 80’s to end 90’s, can been seen different life styles. Mainly, these peoples are exposed to new technology since birth and developed their child hood with use of gadgets, which do not have lives, and not move with cultural and religious activities. This may not introduce on rethinking ability and the empathy on heart. Therefore, people live in virtual environment and will lose the culture and human interaction. In addition, due to the reluctance of accepting external roles and always move with the competition with each other, creates social distance and ultimately reduction in respectfulness.
Nevertheless, politeness is coming from the culture and the attitude, can grew with proper guidance. However, it cannot be gain from the higher education with the competitive environment. Therefore, education system should be modified with giving priority on discipline from the preschools rather subject concentric education pattern. In addition, as parents have more responsibility to avoid youngsters from the isolation. Giving them opportunity to work with social, cultural and more religious events, developed inner behaviors. This will cause to think on others and develop respects to each other.
Considering all above, even though there is an effect on less polite and respect on new generation people, which creates from the society. Therefore, it is a right time to react to correct by elders and education consultants to have better future in peaceful world.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'can be' or 'has been'?
Suggestion: can be; has been
... X, who born in early 80’s to end 90’s, can been seen different life styles. Mainly, the...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...new technology since birth and developed their child hood with use of gadgets, wh...
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Message: Did you mean 'thinking'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'cause' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: thinking
...eloped inner behaviors. This will cause to think on others and develop respects to each ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, nevertheless, so, therefore, well, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1586.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43150684932 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85556480024 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606164383562 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.1420266968 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.125 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.25 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183533658831 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0593131040894 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0646658906633 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119666154995 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0628488775137 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.5 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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