You have seen an advertisement for a community college that needs teachers for night classes.
Write a letter to the community college. In your letter:
• say which advertisement you are answering
• describe which course(s) you want to teach, and what it/they would be about
• explain why you would be a suitable teacher
Dear Personnel Department - Community college,
I am writing to you in response to an advertisement published on Weekly Newspaper last week. The ad was on finding some teachers who could be in charge of night classes held by your college.
I would like to apply for the accounting position. Suggested tentative course content will include three main sections: accounting standards, their application and common difficulties in practice. Each module is expected to be about 30-hour long and I also attach the proposed detailed agenda for your further references.
My major at university is accounting, and I have just completed a public accountant certificate, which was awarded by CPA Australia. I have worked for a consulting company as an accounting consultant for 5 years. Besides, I have cooperated with an education center to build teaching materials and an offer training service to their students on the above field. Given related knowledge and experiences, it is such an honour that you consider me for the vacancy.
Thanks and look forward to hearing from you.
Best regards,
Mai
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 32.9175257732 52% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 929.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 175.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30857142857 4.54256449028 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97866032897 2.54303337028 117% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.748571428571 0.622605031667 120% => OK
syllable_count: 282.6 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.762461332 44.8134815571 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.4545454545 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9090909091 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.45454545455 4.34317383033 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28642472717 0.216113520407 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0847191377508 0.0766984524023 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0533605074847 0.0603063233224 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129776565379 0.12726935374 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.045276387522 0.0580467560999 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 8.37731958763 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 70.7449484536 80% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.22 8.71597938144 152% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.61 7.59969072165 126% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 41.2886597938 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.