Many parents encourage young people to leave home when they become older, while others think they should stay at home with the family. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
With dramatic changes in economic and social lifestyles, more and more parents tend to motivate their children to live alone as they grow up. While some people are of the view that the youngster had better live with their family. I will discuss both view before reaching a reasoned opinion on the issue.
On the one hand, there are many positive aspects that young people can benefit from being independent of their parents. By staying alone, teenagers have a chance to develop decision-making skills, as they need to be solely in charge of their actions. Besides, learning to do chore works like cleaning, washing, cooking is a practical way to improve time-management skills and boost their confidence.
On the flip side, there are many risks that youngster may have when being reliant on their own. Naive and inexperienced young people may have difficulties in dealing with unexpected situations that can adversely impact their life. When a youngster fall under depression, he may easily get addicted to alcohol or drugs. This situation is less likely to happen with anyone having close relationship with their parents. Due to research by University of California, social relationship, especially among family members, is the key solution that helps reduce anxiety and stress. Moreover, the burden on daily expenditures like accommodation, food is also released when being with family, as they are shared and financed by parents. Youngster can save a great amount of money to spend on other leisure activities to nurture their life.
To sum up, despite some skills that a young adults might develop when living on their own, the risks they are exposed to far outweighs its benefits.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, if, may, moreover, so, while, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1419.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14130434783 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71493367126 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615942028986 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.3631101288 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 101.357142857 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7142857143 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.85714285714 7.06120827912 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207262776733 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0734901776323 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0476330226138 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12971805912 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0467525613401 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.