You have some library books that you are unable to return as a member of your family in another city has fallen sick and you have had to go and look after them. Write a letter to the library.
-explaining the situation
-apologise for the inconvenience called
-and say that you are going to do
Dear Sir,
I am writing to apologize for not being able to return the library books on time as I had to rush to another city to take care of my sick grandmother. Allow me to explain the situation in detail.
To elucidate my grandmother lives alone in Bristol and from time to time I need to visit her to keep a check on her. Unfortunately, last weekend I received a call from the hospital stating that she had fallen sick due to food poisoning, therefore, hospital staff required a presence of the immediate family member to sort out some paper-work. Since my father was travelling at the same time, therefore, I needed to travel immediately to Bristol. Although I am punctual in returning the books however due to the above-mentioned reason I was unable to return the books, therefore, I would like to sincerely apologize.
Lastly, I would be returning back to my hometown tomorrow, therefore, I would be able to return the books first thing in the morning. Once again I sincerely apologize for any inconvenience caused.
Yours faithfully
Saad Mobarak
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 20, Rule ID: RETURN_BACK[1]
Message: Use simply 'returning'.
Suggestion: returning
...erely apologize. Lastly, I would be returning back to my hometown tomorrow, therefore, I w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, lastly, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 882.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 183.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81967213115 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94751889867 2.54303337028 116% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.612021857923 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 291.6 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.2730412886 44.8134815571 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.0 76.5299724578 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3333333333 16.8248392259 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.11111111111 4.34317383033 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181303926259 0.216113520407 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0695138677416 0.0766984524023 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0553622184899 0.0603063233224 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132171945946 0.12726935374 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0645467471917 0.0580467560999 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 8.37731958763 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 70.7449484536 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 8.71597938144 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.