You heard there is a job to guide tourists in your town for a travel company.
Write a letter to the company. In your letter:
• How (where) you heard about this job.
• Why you think you are suitable for this job.
• Ask some questions about this job
Dear Sir or Madam,
I have heard through my friend that there is a vacancy for a guide in your travel company.
To initiate, I would like to bring this into your notice that I have completed a three year course on tourists and management a week ago from a reputed college. I consider myself apt for this job as I have already completed my internship where I have have managed a bunch of tourists in Taj Mahal, Agra. Not only this but also I have also presented a live session on 'How to manage tourists' in my college last week and therefore will prove to be asset to your company.
I have few questions in my mind which I would like to be answered and are mentioned below-
1. Duration of working hours
2. Initial pay
3. Maximum Leaves allowed in a month.
Once you revert, I will join from the next day onwards. Hope my queries gets resolved quickly.
Thanks
Sanya
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 247, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: have
...already completed my internship where I have have managed a bunch of tourists in Taj Maha...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 252, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'had'.
Suggestion: had
...dy completed my internship where I have have managed a bunch of tourists in Taj Maha...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 720.0 937.175257732 77% => OK
No of words: 163.0 206.0 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.41717791411 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34994152047 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 127.690721649 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.656441717791 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 229.5 290.88556701 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.5818211556 44.8134815571 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.0 76.5299724578 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.4 4.34317383033 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189115354434 0.216113520407 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0509002631889 0.0766984524023 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0562297048306 0.0603063233224 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0672899388637 0.12726935374 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0700296868767 0.0580467560999 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 8.37731958763 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.06 8.71597938144 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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