You live close to a restaurant and have recently been disturbed by the noise coming from the restaurant in the evenings. Write a letter to owner of the restaurant. In your letter.
1. explain why you find the noise disturbing
2. suggest a way to solve the problem,
3. explain what you will do If the problem is not solved.
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to express my concerns related to the noise coming from the colony parking area which you have rented from our society.
After coming back from the office daily around 6 PM, I see the customers are waiting in your parking area to enjoy your hospitality services. Since your restaurant cooks delicious meals, customers have to wait for at least twenty minutes in the parking area as you do not have a spacious space at your place.
However, the serene surroundings of our neighborhood face problems because some of your guests play loud music in their cars in the parking area. I have received complaints from locals on the same problem since I am the general secretary of this area where I deal with the problems faced by the residents. I would request you to put a board in the parking space for maintaining the silence because locals do not like the noise pollution, especially the loud music from cars.
I hope you understand the problems faced by the locals because of the loud music. If this problem remains the same, unfortunately, I have to take the colony parking space which was provided to you on a monthly rental basis. Besides, I will request to government authorities to shift your restaurant in the commercial area which is in the next block.
I am looking forward to seeing a positive response from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Shwatank Bhasin
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... especially the loud music from cars. I hope you understand the problems faced ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, however, if, look, so, at least
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 0.0 5.05154639175 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 26.3917525773 152% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1162.0 937.175257732 124% => OK
No of words: 243.0 206.0 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78189300412 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57193415506 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539094650206 0.622605031667 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 358.2 290.88556701 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 42.9722185865 44.8134815571 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.636363636 76.5299724578 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0909090909 16.8248392259 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.63636363636 4.34317383033 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212788714707 0.216113520407 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0835035255519 0.0766984524023 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.052882541689 0.0603063233224 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130344199819 0.12726935374 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0528387769878 0.0580467560999 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 8.37731958763 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 70.7449484536 81% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 8.71597938144 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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