Some people say that cars are best to use in cities while others think that bicycles are better. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
There are predominantly two contrasting views where a section of society vehemently deems that motor vehicles like cars are the best means of transports while others emphasize that bicycles are better than cars. In this essay, I will discuss both views in detail and will conclude my opinion.
On the one side, various factors make a section of people advocate that automobiles like cars are better than bicycles while communicating to destinations in the cities and have many reasons to substantiate it. First and foremost is the private cars are an attractive means of transport. They make traveling comfortable and convenient, and it is not a physically strenuous activity. Plus, someone driving a car is not exposed to harsh weather. To illustrate, take the case of India where the temperature reaches 50 degrees celsius. In such extreme weather conditions, it is impossible to use anything other than cars or public transports like metros and cabs. Moreover, cars can save us a lot of time, especially when a person knows how to avoid congested traffic by using highways.
On the other side, bicycles as a mode of transportation in urban regions are fascinating alternatives. They help in improving the physical fitness of riders and also control obesity-related health problems. According to a BBC survey, a daily half-hour bicycle ride can reduce the risk of diabetes and stress. Also, it will improve the metabolism rate of our body. Additionally, this kind of transport is eco-friendly. Finally, there is no risk of air pollution which is a key concern with the use of automobiles. Therefore, it is evident that using bicycles for computing in workplaces improves air quality in the cities.
To conclude, in my profound opinion, bicycles and cars have their merits and demerits as means of transports in cities. Thus, individuals should wisely choose these two options before computing to their desired destinations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, moreover, so, therefore, thus, while, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1587.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08653846154 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89144313035 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580128205128 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 516.6 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 312.0 20.2975951904 1537% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1587.0 106.682146367 1488% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 312.0 20.7667163134 1502% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 67.0 7.06120827912 949% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284246709823 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.284246709823 0.084324248473 337% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160213159777 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0557469732624 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 158.5 13.0946893788 1210% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -253.66 50.2224549098 -505% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 126.2 11.3001002004 1117% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.72 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 23.62 8.58950901804 275% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 57.0 9.78957915832 582% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 126.8 10.1190380762 1253% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 127.0 10.7795591182 1178% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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