You live in a room in a college where you share it with another student. You find it very difficult to study and work there because your roommate always has friends visiting. He/she has parties in the room and sometimes borrows your things without asking you.
Write a letter to the Accommodation Officer at the college and ask for a new room next term. You would prefer a single room and explain your reasons
Dear Sir,
My name is Bilwin Paul. I live in room no 11 of the college’s hostel. I am writing this letter to request you to allocate me a new room at the start of next term. The reason for this is that I always get disturbed by the nuisance of my inconsiderate roommate,” James Bond”.
There are a number of issues I am facing because of the thoughtless behavior of James, it has become next to impossible for me to study as he always comes into the room with a group of friends. They all talk aloud and often play music. At times, they arrange dance parties and also sometimes use my cupboard and other stuff without my consent.
However, my difficulties do not get over here. I have to submit my thesis at the end of this term. I am under a lot of stress because I am not able to study thoroughly. Hence, I put forward a strong request to change my room and allot me a single room in the next session. I do need a favor because it is a question of my academic career.
I am waiting for your positive response and prompt reply.
Yours Faithfully,
Bilwin Paul.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 264, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , &apos
...he nuisance of my inconsiderate roommate,' James Bond'. There are a num...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 900.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 204.0 206.0 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.41176470588 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66076245891 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.593137254902 0.622605031667 95% => OK
syllable_count: 280.8 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.1798868792 44.8134815571 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.2857142857 76.5299724578 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5714285714 16.8248392259 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 4.34317383033 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176638751322 0.216113520407 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0553414590124 0.0766984524023 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0483612150282 0.0603063233224 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0958405458752 0.12726935374 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0308808304018 0.0580467560999 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.6 8.37731958763 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.71 8.71597938144 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.96 7.59969072165 92% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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