You live in a room in college which you share with another student.
However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it
very difficult to work.
Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In your letter
describe the situation
explain your problems and why it is difficult to work
say what kind of accommodation you would prefer
Dear Sir or Madam,
My name is Kevin, I am 3rd student of Financial Management at Kent University.
I am writing this letter to express my dissatisfaction regarding my room mate whom I have already shared with. As you probably know that we have been staying in campus dormitory since we started the college.
In fact I have not had any problem by the year, however with coming my new room mate, a few serious problem has started appear.
The first and major trouble related to my buddy is that he often takes my private item without asking me. On the other hand, he is inviting to all friends to our room to hold night party.
Could you imagine that how would be difficult for me to focus on my lessons during the final term ? I can not abide him anymore in this circumstances.
If it is available for you, I would like change my room until the end of the term. As I heard of my classmates the center dormitory of our college is quite silent and close to the student library. It would be nice choice for me to study without having some distactions.
I look forward to hearing some positive response from you as soon as possible.
Yours Faithfully.
Kevin.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, look, regarding, so, in fact, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 967.0 937.175257732 103% => OK
No of words: 213.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.53990610329 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50354364975 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.661971830986 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 301.5 290.88556701 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.0616396759 44.8134815571 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.5833333333 76.5299724578 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.75 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.58333333333 4.34317383033 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.29896907216 163% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205014351902 0.216113520407 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0662108652771 0.0766984524023 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0465024200822 0.0603063233224 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0893023498109 0.12726935374 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0468373476214 0.0580467560999 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 8.37731958763 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.76 8.71597938144 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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