You live in a room in college which you share with another student.
However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it
very difficult to work.
Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In your letter
describe the situation
explain your problems and why it is difficult to work
say what kind of accommodation you would prefer.
Dear Sir or Madam,
My name is Kevin and I am a student of Master of Financial Economy of Business school.
I am writing to express my dissatisfaction regarding my roommate that I share my dormitory room. Please allow me explain with detail.
As you can check from your boarding details I have been staying at North- Queen Campus and I have not had any problem so far. However, due to fact that he has some negative behaviors toward me, I can not get on well with him. Since I am in the middle of exams to finish my degree, I can not focus on my studies properly. Other disturbing problem is that even though I have warmed him many time , he is always listening loud music that spoiling both me and other pupils in the next doors.
If you approve my request that Could you give a change to move a different kind of accommodation? If there is empty room per one person in the south side of dormitory I can move out right now?
I look forward to hearing positive response from you in the near future.
Your Faithfully.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 233, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
..., I can not get on well with him. Since I am in the middle of exams to finish my...
^^
Line 6, column 387, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun time seems to be countable; consider using: 'many times'.
Suggestion: many times
...m is that even though I have warmed him many time , he is always listening loud music tha...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 396, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... even though I have warmed him many time , he is always listening loud music that ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, regarding, so, well, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 845.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 191.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.42408376963 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48689599556 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.664921465969 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 264.6 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.4118611158 44.8134815571 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.5 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1 16.8248392259 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.7 4.34317383033 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182526358868 0.216113520407 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0657180005953 0.0766984524023 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.049076793211 0.0603063233224 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0876961785082 0.12726935374 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0377368138564 0.0580467560999 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 8.37731958763 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.36 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.