You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to study/work.
Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In the letter:
describe the situation
explain your problems and why it is difficult to study/work
say what kind of accommodation you would prefer
I am writing concerning the complications I have been facing with accommodation arrangements at college.
Actually I was allotted room number 208 at the college hostel, where I live with one another student. Although accommodation itself is good, my roommate has been causing some issues since the day one. His nature is very aggressive, making it difficult for me to live with him. Besides, he does not cooperate at all with me.
I would like to explain the problems that I have to face while living with him. Firstly, I find it really tough to concentrate fully on my studies as he often plays music loudly. Even though I requested him many times, he keeps on doing the same thing repeatedly. Moreover, he usually brings his friends to room and do party till late night, which has led me to write you about my study concerns.
I would prefer rather living with someone of quite nature and most significantly who want to focus only on studies. I appreciate if you could transfer me with someone else of this kind of student or shift my current mate to somewhere else.I would be obliged if my request is catered to priority.
Looking forward to your outright response on this matter.
Yours faithfully,
John Sham
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 240, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...shift my current mate to somewhere else.I would be obliged if my request is cater...
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Line 7, column 240, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...shift my current mate to somewhere else.I would be obliged if my request is cater...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, besides, first, firstly, if, look, moreover, really, so, while, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1016.0 937.175257732 108% => OK
No of words: 212.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79245283019 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65880456654 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 127.690721649 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.698113207547 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 315.0 290.88556701 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.1628433126 44.8134815571 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.1538461538 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3076923077 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.23076923077 4.34317383033 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.297579654118 0.216113520407 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0887891149235 0.0766984524023 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0625041961031 0.0603063233224 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138621745958 0.12726935374 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0615458456637 0.0580467560999 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 8.37731958763 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 8.71597938144 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.