You live in a room in college which you share with another student However there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college In your letter describe the situatio

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You live in a room in college which you share with another student.
However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it
very difficult to work.

Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In your letter

describe the situation
explain your problems and why it is difficult to work
say what kind of accommodation you would prefer
You do NOT need to write any addresses.

Begin your letter as follows:

Dear Sir or Madam,

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to address an accommodation problem I have been facing lately and would very much like to bring it to your kind attention.

For the last two months, I have been co-habiting with a new sophomore student. Ever since his arrival, it appears to me that I have grappled with maintaining my academic performance in his presence. In fact, the results of my weekly quizzes suggest an actual decline in my scores. This, however, did not come to me as a surprise, since an underlying sleep-deprivation problem throughout this period had me seeing it coming.

As nice as the new roommate is, his routine and a number of his habits are in stark conflict with mine. For one thing, having a different schedule means that sometimes our sleep times do not overlap, forcing both of us to sleep with the lights on, which I have always found particularly difficult. Furthermore, he seems to adopt lower standards of hygiene. This puts on me the burden of cleaning up some mutual areas, like the studying desk.

Being our appointed accommodation officer, I would kindly ask you to consider some changes. I would be totally open for sharing the same room with another junior student, more so if we can arrange a way to make sure we would be a good fit. In addition, I can also manage to move to a smaller individual room if need be.

Looking forward to your generous response.

Yours sincerely,
Assem Ashraf

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Average: 9.5 (2 votes)
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, look, so, in addition, in fact, for one thing

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 26.3917525773 133% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1189.0 937.175257732 127% => OK
No of words: 251.0 206.0 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73705179283 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74426521524 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 127.690721649 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.669322709163 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 369.0 290.88556701 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.6341134294 44.8134815571 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.9285714286 76.5299724578 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9285714286 16.8248392259 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 4.34317383033 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177739137036 0.216113520407 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0492218448993 0.0766984524023 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.032618742371 0.0603063233224 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0823916565907 0.12726935374 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0311345834769 0.0580467560999 54% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 8.37731958763 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 8.71597938144 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 41.2886597938 162% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.