Some people think that having a set of retirement age eg 65 years for everybody regardless of occupations is unfair They believe that certain workers deserve to retire and receive a pension at an early age Do you agree or disagree Which types of workers d

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Some people think that having a set of retirement age (eg. 65 years) for everybody regardless of occupations is unfair. They believe that certain workers deserve to retire and receive a pension at an early age.

Do you agree or disagree?

Which types of workers do you think should benefit from early retirement?

Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Most of the developed world is now experiencing unprecedentedly aging populations, due to, in part, better healthcare and lower fertility rates. One inevitable result is that the line between working and retirement ages is being put into question, which is currently fixed at 65 for most of the developed world.

With larger diversity in the retiring population, it is indeed becoming clearer now that a one-size-fits-all approach might have been wrong from the get-go. Having a firm physiological threshold as the only criterion for retirement seems to overlook the variation across different occupations. For example, the physiological impact of working as a porter for 45 years has arguably way more health ramifications than tutoring for the same period. By the time workers in the more physically-demanding jobs get to retire, they might be less physically equipped to pursue their interests as geriatrics.

On the other hand, from an economic point of view, pension benefits are seen as reimbursements for past day workers for taxpaying and giving to the community. Building on this logic, there should be an early pension path made available to workers who can manage to produce significantly higher than the national average, should they choose at some point to rather go after cultural and spiritual endeavors.

In summary, having a fixed retirement age fails to address the great variations across both the natures of different occupations and the very working population. By further defining the economic and social rationale behind the merits of retirement, we should strive to propose new schemes to assess workers' eligibility for early retirement.

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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1410.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40229885057 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15491592869 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.659003831418 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 29.4735474621 49.4020404114 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 141.0 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268313272811 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0931283560382 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0376991098651 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145463702757 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0125133426892 0.056905535591 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.34 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.71 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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