Some people think that having a set of retirement age(eg. 65 years) for everybody regardless of occupations is unfair. They believe that certain workers deserve to retire and receive a pension at an early age.
Do you agree or disagree?
Which types of workers do you think should benefit from early retirement?
Include examples and your own experience or knowledge.
In this competitive and contemporary era, humans spending almost 1/3 of their valuable time to do work for survival. Early age retirement by a few people without knowing their position at the company would be not appropriate. While others are saying that a certain type of employee better deserves early retirement with a pension. I totally agree with the given statement and discuss both sides and also mention which group would be benefited more from an early age retirement.
Firstly, humans, one of the intelligent animals on the earth, work hard at work to satisfy their desired goal. If there is a specified retirement age for every working employee, then it would be a golden chance for the youngsters who just finished their tertiary education from the reputed universities. The new generation has an enormous spirit with enthusiasm to do something new if would get a chance. Many companies would use recently passed out students, who have man skills with technological knowledge, on the replacement of senior employee. People who reached the age of 65 years would spend the remaining time with their family and friends. There should be a fixed age of retirement for the public no matter where they work.
However, for some work sectors, the human body, skills, stamina, and talent matter only for a certain period of time. This type of job profession retires at an early age, such as actors, sports players, and a bodybuilder. In these fields, their career starts at an early age and also finish before other employee works in a different field. These people make a huge chunk of money in a shorter time period compared to others. I would say that people need to retire at a certain age, so the new generation could get a chance to use their knowledge and skill to develop something new for the country and acquire new skills. While some short spam job workers deserve an early age retirement.
To conclude, different work has a different age limit to get retirement and it all highly depends on the type of work. Few could be retired at an early age while others must retire at the specified age limit declared by the government.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, so, then, thus, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1783.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 368.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84510869565 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5977109648 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.532608695652 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 562.5 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.608460994 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.0555555556 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4444444444 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.61111111111 7.06120827912 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.342684518337 0.244688304435 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120496789712 0.084324248473 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0722115800799 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.232911750844 0.151304729494 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0458571101641 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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