Even though doctors advise old people to get more exercise, many old people do not get enough. What are the reasons for this? What are some possible solutions for this?
In this contemporary era, the dawn of science and technology, doctors are trying to keep everyone fit and healthy no matter how older are people. Many doctors have suggestions for the elder people group to keep life and body healthy, however, few are not considering it seriously without thinking about the consequences of it. In this essay, I shall discuss the reasons behind not the following advice and also provide a few measures to overcome this problem.
There are numerous reasons for the aged citizen to avoid a healthy lifestyle. First and foremost, over 60 years is a phase of life when the communication between a body and the mind slightly decline compared to young people. Senior citizen feels tired and not energetic to do work which they used to do before within a matter of time. Few parts of the body are no more able to function properly with age. A survey has been done by the USA magazine, for the instance, an aged person over 60, has more physical problems such as disease, knee, and feet problems, difficulties in walking. Secondly, the other reason to support not following hospital staff is feeling lonely at home without any support or motivation from other people. It is a phase of life when human needs support for others to keep themselves productive and exercise on regular bases. However, we could overcome these issues with proper planning and the help of others.
On the flip side, the senior citizen could be more active and productive if provided proper support. Nowadays, youngsters are more active and conscious about their health and physical structure, anyhow this youth start the exercise with elder people then they might feel accompanied and energetic throughout the exercise session. The government can contribute some effort in it with an awareness program, advertisement on social media as well as on the news channels. Additionally, the government should provide a discount at the fitness center, as consequences many older people attract toward it. In India, Gujarat province, with the support of the government and individuals, has made a park for the senior citizen to do physical activities as the doctor suggested.
To put it in a nutshell, age is just a number, still, there are few individuals at their elder age are more fit and strong compared to the youth. Though there are few reasons for those people to avoid physical activities, with proper guidance and help we can motivate them and fuel them up with energy.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, then, well, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2065.0 1615.20841683 128% => OK
No of words: 416.0 315.596192385 132% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96394230769 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51620172871 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64073960966 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.526442307692 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 658.8 506.74238477 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.8422339188 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.722222222 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1111111111 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.05555555556 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197610019995 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0595147324886 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0410923832583 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126054899172 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0344831374989 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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