The advance in air travel are focused only on first-class and this seems to have left others with no benefits at all. Do you agree or disagree?
In this contemporary era, the dawn of science and technology has an enormous indispensable role in our routine life. These people say that air traveling companies only focusing on first-class passengers only regardless of considering advancement for other groups of people who travel on the same plane. This essay will argue about the changes and development with air travel and give my opinion in the coming paragraph.
There are enormous reasons for concentrating more only on business-class travelers. First and foremost, these commuters are paying a bunch of money to get luxurious travel to their destination. Some of them are big businessmen however others are getting paid by their organizations or companies. Business-class travel ensures that passengers have all means of relaxation and proper sitting and sleeping arrangements for a long-distance trip. Emirates, for the instance, has been putting a lot of effort into their wealthy customers. As airline companies could provide more services and facilities as they get more money from the customers.
On the flip side, within 2 decades, there has been a huge change in setting and traveling facilities done by many air travel agencies. Moreover, 80% of the total travelers are booking their tickets for an economy-class. If airplanes provide relaxing and supportive services to their commuters then they would get more travelers in the future by just reading helpful reviews and experiencing comfortable travel to the trip destination. Mostly middle-class people choose to travel in the economy- class over luxurious-class considering their income and savings.
To put it in a nutshell, technology has changed everything over a time period. However, with time the price is hicking every single day, but there is no any change with travel pattern. I, personally, slightly agree that air journey organizations are concetrating more towards first-class or business-class over other classes.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 110, Rule ID: MANY_FEW_UNCOUNTABLE[2]
Message: Use 'much' or 'little' with uncountable nouns.
Suggestion: much; little
...etting and traveling facilities done by many air travel agencies. Moreover, 80% of t...
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Line 7, column 151, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
... hicking every single day, but there is no any change with travel pattern. I, pers...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, moreover, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1657.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.5049833887 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14377712649 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591362126246 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 519.3 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.8431914734 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.5625 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8125 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.6875 7.06120827912 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275805585839 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0849281651584 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0690561484636 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174454513533 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0595395977878 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.62 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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