You have heard that a developer plans to build a shopping center near your home. Write a letter to the council.
- Say how you heard about the plan.
- Explain how you feel about it.
- Ask for more information about it.
Dear sir/Madam,
I am writing this letter to let you know about the new architectural development in my area, at the same time I would like you to realize the situation in my neighborhood.
Recently, last week, I got one mail regarding a new shopping center development project near to my house, and I was happy as well as sad at the same time. I am happy because in my area there are not many stores to buy basic amenities, for that we have to travel almost 20 kilometers one way. Because of this new construction, we won't need to travel far for basic needs. But I am concerned about my neighborhood, as there are many residential apartments and houses with few gardens and one beautiful park near to my house. If the government passes this project then it would affect a lot for local people and also in my are we have left enough tree to balance our ecosystem and reduce the pollution level. It would affect worse compared to good to the citizen of our town.
However, there are few empty lands and farm near to my house, if the government buys it and make leisure places there and also if the builder promises to plant many trees and plants around and inside the building then we could save the environment and also a leisure activity area could be useful for local residents. You could give me more information about this project and I would discuss and describe everything with my people.
Hopefully waiting for your reply. You can contact me by telephone +1(226)348-5508.
Yours faithfully,
Amitkumar Savaliya
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, regarding, so, then, well, you know, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 5.05154639175 277% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.85567010309 259% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1262.0 937.175257732 135% => OK
No of words: 270.0 206.0 131% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67407407407 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 3.78020617076 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66332094642 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 127.690721649 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562962962963 0.622605031667 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 399.6 290.88556701 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 78.7155568416 44.8134815571 176% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.166666667 76.5299724578 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 16.8248392259 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.91666666667 4.34317383033 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181726356612 0.216113520407 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0692005301723 0.0766984524023 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0571314882543 0.0603063233224 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130473486671 0.12726935374 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.046141102084 0.0580467560999 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 8.37731958763 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 70.7449484536 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.