You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work.
Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In the letter,
• describe the situation
• explain your problems and why it is difficult to work
• say what kind of accommodation you would prefer
Dear Sir, Madam,
I am writing this letter in reference to my current accommodation issues. Please allow me to explain the situation, I've lived on the ground floor in the room number 03 since a month with one of my co batchmate from the Entertainment stream.
As we all ware of the fact that rooms available on the zero floor are constructed during 19th century and used as a medical laboratory during that period. In the result ,some of the part in the room are already damaged. However facility department have claimed to us that there are not damages in the room. Later we have noticed that there are no proper arrangement have been done in the damaged area which is 1/4th area of the room. Due to shortage of the space my mate keeps her guitar & elements of her event play in my personal area. As her cultural event is scheduled everyweek for a year on university demand.
I find lots of difficulties while working. In simpler words, I am not able to work at all.
I would like to request you that , if you could arrange a different accomodation for me on the 5th floor where a single occupancy is available. it would be a great help from your side and i would really appreciate it!
Many Thanks,
Shahin
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 117, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I've
...ease allow me to explain the situation, Ive lived on the ground floor in the room n...
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Line 7, column 169, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ratory during that period. In the result ,some of the part in the room are already...
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Line 7, column 171, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...tory during that period. In the result ,some of the part in the room are already damaged. H...
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Line 7, column 221, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...e part in the room are already damaged. However facility department have claimed to us ...
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Line 13, column 33, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... all. I would like to request you that , if you could arrange a different accomo...
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Line 13, column 145, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
... where a single occupancy is available. it would be a great help from your side an...
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Line 13, column 189, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ould be a great help from your side and i would really appreciate it! Many T...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, really, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1007.0 937.175257732 107% => OK
No of words: 221.0 206.0 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.55656108597 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55809060537 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 127.690721649 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.651583710407 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 320.4 290.88556701 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.7986254052 44.8134815571 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.9166666667 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4166666667 16.8248392259 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5 4.34317383033 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16921144758 0.216113520407 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0489789506438 0.0766984524023 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0415159868753 0.0603063233224 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0888500919432 0.12726935374 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0295631793946 0.0580467560999 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 8.37731958763 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.17 8.71597938144 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.