You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement, and you find it very difficult to work.
Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In the letter describe the situation explain your problems and why it is difficult to work say what kind of accommodation you would prefer.
Dear Sir,
I am writing in order to express my concerns over room sharing with my current roommate and request you to provide an alternative arrangement.
I am currently staying in a double-bedded room in ‘Madam Curie’ hostel and facing tremendous privacy issues. Firstly, the current setup of the rooms does not allow enough space for an individual and to add to this, this limited space has to be shared between two. To make matter worse, my current roommate is a party person and her big friend circle finds our room to be a picnic spot. Since, I am currently preparing for the UPSC examination, I find this constant noise and disturbances unbearable. Though I have personally put forward my grievances but that have mostly fallen upon the deaf ears.
Therefore, I request you to kindly change my accommodation to a single bedded room and update me about the increased charges. I do not wish to lose my valuable time further and request you to make the arrangements at the earliest.
Looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully
Bhawna Sharma
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, look, so, therefore, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 902.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 181.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98342541436 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84939361711 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.662983425414 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 274.5 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.0930168483 44.8134815571 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.2 76.5299724578 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1 16.8248392259 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.7 4.34317383033 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175464462408 0.216113520407 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0670530915155 0.0766984524023 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0519163726041 0.0603063233224 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12445665946 0.12726935374 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0351287201887 0.0580467560999 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 8.37731958763 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 8.71597938144 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.