You migrated to another country. Write a letter to your friend to describe your present life and tell him/her why you chose the country?
Dear Nayan,
How are you? We haven't talked for a long time so I decided to check on you. As you might already know that I migrated to australia last December. After a transitory couple of months, I have finally settled down and now I am enjoying the different way of lifestyle here.
since I obtained my professional engineering license, I have been planning to migrate to Melbourne, the second biggest city in Oceania. my sister moved here about 5 years ago as a civil engineer and she told me that the job market here was great since they were hiring fresh engineers for a good salary. Once I migrated a few months back, I started looking for corporate jobs and finally got hired at Toyota. The pay is good and they have two paid holidays at the end of the year. I take weekend trips to different mountains for hiking and apart from that the weather and food here is amazing.
I really like the people here and the society. The locals are friendly and I have made a girlfriend here. she is an amazing Australian folk who really connects with me. I hope you make a trip to australia soon and meet us. hoping to hear back from you soon.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Dear Nayan, How are you? We havent talked for a long...
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Dear Nayan, How are you? We havent talked for a long time so I decided to ...
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...long time so I decided to check on you. As you might already know that I migrated ...
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...ng the different way of lifestyle here. since I obtained my professional enginee...
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...e different way of lifestyle here. since I obtained my professional engineering ...
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...ne, the second biggest city in Oceania. my sister moved here about 5 years ago as ...
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...ndly and I have made a girlfriend here. she is an amazing Australian folk who reall...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, look, really, second, so, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 934.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 212.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.40566037736 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38526313896 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.660377358491 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 297.0 290.88556701 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.6207145368 44.8134815571 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.7142857143 76.5299724578 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1428571429 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 4.34317383033 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0986265162812 0.216113520407 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0423086063645 0.0766984524023 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0455003179923 0.0603063233224 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0785970700224 0.12726935374 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0453195751783 0.0580467560999 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.9 8.37731958763 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.71 8.71597938144 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.