You missed an appointment. Write a letter explaining what happened. In your letter include:What the appointment wasAn apology for missing the appointmentA request to reschedule

Essay topics:

You missed an appointment. Write a letter explaining what happened. In your letter include:

What the appointment was

An apology for missing the appointment

A request to reschedule

I would like to express my apology for an interview in your technical department at Dotin Corporation. Please allow me to elaborate on what exactly occurred.

As we had set a time for the technical interview to be held on the May 24th, I would have not missed the mentioned time for anything. Unfortunately, however, I had an emergency situation on the night prior to the appointment. My appendix ruptured and as you can imagine, I rushed to a hospital for an immediate surgery. I would have informed you for my absence, if I had access to my cellphone, without a doubt.

I hope you can empathize with the predicament I experienced. I am in recovery now and as I garnered from what my doctor suggested, I will be alright in a couple of days. Hence, it would be your unforgettable favor on me, if you could reschedule another interview on the upcoming week.

Thanking you for your understanding,

Milad

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 63, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ize with the predicament I experienced. I am in recovery now and as I garnered fr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, may

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 757.0 937.175257732 81% => OK
No of words: 160.0 206.0 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73125 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55655882008 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09432444162 2.54303337028 122% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 127.690721649 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59375 0.622605031667 95% => OK
syllable_count: 246.6 290.88556701 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.6775186252 44.8134815571 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 75.7 76.5299724578 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.3 4.34317383033 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212916832826 0.216113520407 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0824478197923 0.0766984524023 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0292747380362 0.0603063233224 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136961466469 0.12726935374 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0204136299739 0.0580467560999 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 8.37731958763 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 8.71597938144 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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