Something in an airport delayed you and you have missed your flight. Write a letter to the airport’s customer service department. In your letter include:
What delayed you
How missing this flight affected you
What you would like the airport to do about this issue
Dear Sir/ Madam,
I feel the necessity to bring your attention to an issue in which the security unit of the airport operated inappropriately. Allow me to elaborate on a situation I was in challenge.
Last week, I had a flight to Istanbul where an international seminar on the environment, the field in which I do regular research on, had been scheduled. At the security unit of the airport where every single passenger’s luggage is checked, I was in trouble with a checking system, having a problem in identifying the material inside the suitcase. As you can expect each suitcase had to be opened and eye-controlled by the security unit which really wasted my time and culminated in my flight loss, unfortunately. I missed the opening date ceremony of the seminar and could not harness the whole program, as a result.
I trust you can empathize with my situation. Thus, I am expecting you to take an immediate action by altering the computerized checking system in your security unit. I am also expecting to train your security employees to be agile meanwhile precise, in a visual control.
Expecting your prompt action,
Milad
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, really, so, thus, while, i feel, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 955.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 192.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97395833333 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10094474152 2.54303337028 122% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59375 0.622605031667 95% => OK
syllable_count: 312.3 290.88556701 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.4199377674 44.8134815571 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.5 76.5299724578 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2 16.8248392259 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4 4.34317383033 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181291903719 0.216113520407 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0660435353824 0.0766984524023 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0322086468505 0.0603063233224 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105516912005 0.12726935374 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0221319190749 0.0580467560999 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 8.37731958763 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 70.7449484536 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 8.71597938144 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 7.59969072165 120% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 41.2886597938 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 8.62886597938 139% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.