In many places, new homes are needed, but the only space available for building them is in the countryside. Some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there.
What is your opinion about this?
In the first half of the twenty first century, many cities, megalopolises in particular, have witnessed burgeoning rate of population growth and a requirement for development, as a result. While construction of new homes in the countryside is mainly suggested, some refuted this notion, opining that this approach would have adverse implications on environment.
Urbanization, invariably, is a viable response to the insatiable urge of today industrialization. To cater for this demand, constructing new buildings are positively felt in a myriad of cities, either in their centers or in non-urban parts, in some cases. In a number of metropolitans like Tehran, as a salient instance, establishing extra residential areas is logically feasible in the close countryside, due to the bereft of appropriate settings inside the center and more affordable budget to reside in outer zones. The imposing effects of this trend to the society, however, should not be abandoned unnoticed.
Opponents of adding new buildings to the undisturbed environment, on the other hand, are concerned about the devastating influences of unchecked city expansion might have on the ecosystem of a region. Construction of new projects, as they perceive, means that civil infrastructures including roads, pipelines, etc. are required and those may spoil the landscape. Not similar to this notion, however, are eco-friendly extended conurbations in Australia, which not only have provided the necessity to join the global trend for urbanization, but also have a profound contribution to the sustainable betterment of the whole country.
In way of conclusion, although some negative ramifications of building new homes in the countryside could be thought of, more beneficial impacts for a city are to be deemed, unless sustainable development is taken into account.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 26, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: twenty-first
In the first half of the twenty first century, many cities, megalopolises in ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, so, while, in particular, as a result, in some cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1565.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.58928571429 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.38873998316 2.80592935109 121% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610714285714 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 500.4 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.3630319122 49.4020404114 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.272727273 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4545454545 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.72727272727 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255589901222 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0782160001169 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0692431558329 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147442310293 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0314609534765 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.18 50.2224549098 58% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.44 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.8 8.58950901804 126% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.