You need a new accommodation. Write a letter to the manager who you rent your flat from and explain:
- Why your family need a new accommodation
- When you want to move
- How you would like your new accommodation
Dear Sir or Madam,
My wife and I are your tenants at the Eleganza Estate and I write to inform you that we need a new house. The apartment we rent is Flat 4 of House 3. It is a one-bedroom flat, located on the second floor of the building.
It was a perfect home for my family, considering that it was just my wife and I, and the fact that we had budget constraint at that time. Now that we have a new baby, and with my mother-in-law joining us to help take care of our new child and my spouse, the place has become so compact and unhealthy for all of us. We therefore, believe that a more spacious apartment will be more conducive for us.
As a result, we would love our new home to be a three-bed with all rooms en-suite. This will afford us the space that is lacking in our current abode. It is also our desire that the building be located within Victoria Island, and should have good supply of electricity and water, to save us from having to buy gas for the generators all the time, to power the house and the pumping machine.
Our plan is to move by the end of September, when our current rent expires. Considering that we have about one month to this date, we urge you to speed up action in this search, and Please, let us know as soon as you find something, so we can come for inspection and finalize the deal.
We look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Okoronkwo Alfred.
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'if', 'look', 'second', 'so', 'therefore', 'as for', 'as a result']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.203333333333 0.220444632235 92% => OK
Verbs: 0.153333333333 0.167888034529 91% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0566666666667 0.0606518309736 93% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0433333333333 0.0506257000042 86% => OK
Pronouns: 0.126666666667 0.118615021944 107% => OK
Prepositions: 0.11 0.107062808482 103% => OK
Participles: 0.03 0.041066498444 73% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.36708105107 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0333333333333 0.0385302599488 87% => OK
Particles: 0.00333333333333 0.00132118243153 252% => OK
Determiners: 0.09 0.0714148451538 126% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0166666666667 0.0191574576366 87% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00666666666667 0.00930345855455 72% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1412.0 1141.60824742 124% => OK
No of words: 270.0 206.134020619 131% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22962962963 5.53046319177 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 3.78085437643 107% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.233333333333 0.284621296913 82% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.174074074074 0.211203875043 82% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.1 0.133321485273 75% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0740740740741 0.0843313296314 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36708105107 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 127.690721649 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562962962963 0.622163163488 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 57.3055427771 62.8969750728 91% => OK
How many sentences: 13.0 12.9587628866 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.7692307692 16.4300151701 126% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.5931967631 44.7399317507 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.615384615 90.9928171075 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7692307692 16.4300151701 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.615384615385 0.613754768223 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.09278350515 0% => OK
Readability: 38.1766381766 37.5504026743 102% => OK
Elegance: 1.0618556701 1.13073093955 94% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237066783742 0.331212695627 72% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.12819819277 0.0927372745006 138% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0894589944165 0.0736520305886 121% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.625799651536 0.579516596996 108% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.185831958311 0.180689518051 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.095266475476 0.122183219658 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0784234633295 0.0765303033291 102% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.320730731366 0.211926503985 151% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0605918940864 0.0737400523855 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166619044242 0.203819188451 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0548716784959 0.067151250289 82% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.45360824742 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.48453608247 0% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.0206185567 149% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 4.73195876289 127% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 1.03092783505 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 5.0 2.56701030928 195% => OK
Total topic words: 11.0 8.32989690722 132% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.