You need a new accommodation for your family. Write a letter to the who you rent your flat from and explain:- Why your family need a new accommodation- When you want to move- How you would like your new accommodation

Essay topics:

You need a new accommodation for your family. Write a letter to the who you rent your flat from and explain:
- Why your family need a new accommodation
- When you want to move
- How you would like your new accommodation

Dear Sir or Madam,

My wife and I are your tenants at the Eleganza Estate and I am writing to inform you that we need a new apartment.

The house we live in currently is a one-bedroom flat. It was suitable for both of us, since we were alone and had no child. However, we are expecting our first baby in November and when he is born, my mother-in-law will join us to help take care of him and my spouse. Therefore, we believe that our current abode will be too small for all of us, hence the need for a new home.

Our expectation is to pack into the new house in September, when our current rent expires. This will also allow us some time to get it ready for the people we are expecting.

We would like our new home to be a three-bedroom bungalow with good water and electricity supply. It should also be close to my office in Victoria Island, to enable me shuttle freely between office and home, whenever necessary.

Please let us know as soon as you see something within our description, so we can come for inspection.

Yours faithfully,
Okoronkwo Alfred.

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Average: 5.6 (1 vote)
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'first', 'hence', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'therefore']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.190909090909 0.220444632235 87% => OK
Verbs: 0.163636363636 0.167888034529 97% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0636363636364 0.0606518309736 105% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0590909090909 0.0506257000042 117% => OK
Pronouns: 0.15 0.118615021944 126% => OK
Prepositions: 0.1 0.107062808482 93% => OK
Participles: 0.0181818181818 0.041066498444 44% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.57276514628 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0318181818182 0.0385302599488 83% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00132118243153 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0636363636364 0.0714148451538 89% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0272727272727 0.0191574576366 142% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0136363636364 0.00930345855455 147% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1070.0 1141.60824742 94% => OK
No of words: 198.0 206.134020619 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.40404040404 5.53046319177 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.78085437643 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.242424242424 0.284621296913 85% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.181818181818 0.211203875043 86% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.126262626263 0.133321485273 95% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0858585858586 0.0843313296314 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57276514628 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 127.690721649 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.651515151515 0.622163163488 105% => OK
Word variations: 67.8810531959 62.8969750728 108% => OK
How many sentences: 11.0 12.9587628866 85% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.4300151701 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.3025470428 44.7399317507 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.2727272727 90.9928171075 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 16.4300151701 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.636363636364 0.613754768223 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.09278350515 0% => OK
Readability: 36.1818181818 37.5504026743 96% => OK
Elegance: 0.829268292683 1.13073093955 73% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218828086324 0.331212695627 66% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0695980039681 0.0927372745006 75% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0555299379468 0.0736520305886 75% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.667464847251 0.579516596996 115% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.193465875676 0.180689518051 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0841667757097 0.122183219658 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0680728042919 0.0765303033291 89% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.191759532207 0.211926503985 90% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.111522656322 0.0737400523855 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13977940644 0.203819188451 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0788063080581 0.067151250289 117% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.45360824742 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.48453608247 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.0206185567 75% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 4.73195876289 127% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 1.03092783505 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.56701030928 117% => OK
Total topic words: 9.0 8.32989690722 108% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.