You need to take leave from your work for almost a month for some personal reasons Write a letter to your Manager In your letter Explain the reason for your leave the length of your leave Explain how you intend to deliver the task that was given to you re

Essay topics:

You need to take leave from your work for almost a month for some personal reasons. Write a letter to your Manager. In your letter:
• Explain the reason for your leave & the length of your leave.
• Explain how you intend to deliver the task that was given to you recently and has to be turned in in a week’s time.
• Explain how & who will look after your work while you are away. Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear ...................

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing this letter to apprise you about my leaves due to some reasons and request you to grant me the approval for the same.

I enrolled for my master's education by distance learning along with this job, which commenced in the month of July, last year. Thus, I have received the exam's notification from my institution, which would begin from the first week of March and finish at the end of the month.

Furthermore, I remember that I am handling the yearly reporting project for more than six months that needs to be submitted this week. Therefore, I assure you that I would finish it prior to my leaves as only a few days work is left to complete the assignment.

Additionally, Rajesh has agreed on the creation and maintenance of the monthly-team reports and others documents on my behalf. Hence, I request you to kindly approve my leave request so that I could give my exams.

I look forward to hearing a positive response from you soon.

Yours faithfully,
Chirag Bhardwaj

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 154, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'exams'' or 'exam's'?
Suggestion: exams'; exam's
...y, last year. Thus, I have received the exams notification from my institution, which...
^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, hence, if, look, so, therefore, thus

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 843.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 176.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78977272727 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68460347465 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.659090909091 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 250.2 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.1947575745 44.8134815571 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.6666666667 76.5299724578 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5555555556 16.8248392259 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.22222222222 4.34317383033 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263416032663 0.216113520407 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0999103991804 0.0766984524023 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0695459155882 0.0603063233224 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129582989948 0.12726935374 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0816008064566 0.0580467560999 141% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 8.37731958763 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 8.71597938144 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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