You normally go shopping in the area where you live. However, you think some of the facilities for shoppers could be improved.
Write a letter to your local newspaper. In your letter:
• say in general what you like about shopping in your area
• say what is wrong with the facilities
• suggest how they can be improved
Dear Sir,
I am writing a letter to highlight a couple of facilities which need to be improved near to Ansar Mall as it’s one of the busiest malls in the town to visit.
I am a frequent visitor of Ansar Mall to buy glossary items every month because they have a wide array of products cater to the need of every customer. Besides, the prices in the above-mentioned mall are very competitive compared to the rest of the shopping centers in the town; therefore, most of the people including myself from the area usually go there to buy necessary stuff. Due to the influx of people, the designated parking slots are insufficient for people to park their vehicles, and visitors often park the vehicle on the main road which leads to traffic conjunction in the town.
Considering the above scenario, I would suggest if the vacant plot situated on the opposite side of the road could be allocated for parking because it would help people to park their vehicles in a proper way which leads to ease of the traffic flow in the area.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Best Regards,
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Dear Sir, I am writing a letter to highlight a cou...
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... busiest malls in the town to visit. I am a frequent visitor of Ansar Mall to...
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... to traffic conjunction in the town. Considering the above scenario, I would ...
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...ould help people to park their vehicles in a proper way which leads to ease of the traffic flow...
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...ease of the traffic flow in the area. I look forward to hearing from you soon....
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...ook forward to hearing from you soon. Best Regards,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, look, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 32.9175257732 33% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 26.3917525773 144% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 916.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 195.0 206.0 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69743589744 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54838258125 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594871794872 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 282.6 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 16.3608247423 196% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 87.3071051647 44.8134815571 195% => OK
Chars per sentence: 152.666666667 76.5299724578 199% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.5 16.8248392259 193% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 4.34317383033 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.097474730834 0.216113520407 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0441020346731 0.0766984524023 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0394696949806 0.0603063233224 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0684666189677 0.12726935374 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0276209117704 0.0580467560999 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 8.37731958763 203% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.92 70.7449484536 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 7.45979381443 180% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 8.71597938144 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 7.59969072165 118% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 8.62886597938 209% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 14.8 8.54432989691 173% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.