One of your friends recently had a birthday party, but you missed it and forgot to tell your friend that you couldn't attend. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
Apologize for missing the birthday celebrations
Explain why you missed it and why you did not tell your friend
Say what you would like to do to show that you are sorry.
Hi Shaikh,
I am writing this letter to convey my apologies for not attending your birthday party yesterday evening due to my work commitments.
Let me explain to you in more detail. I have recently been awarded a new project in the Middle East region which was due to start by the end of next month, and I gave my commitment to celebrate the event with you considering the target start date of my project. Nevertheless, all of sudden, I got an email from the client’s representative that they wanted me to start mobilizing staff month before then the target date. As I was not ready to start work due to a shortage of manpower, so I went to Philippine on a war footing to arrange the staffing requirements in order to start the project per the client’s demand. It happened so quickly that I couldn’t able to remember that I should tell you about my sudden plan, and convey my apology.
Now, I would like to invite you for a brunch to compensate for my absence from the party. I think the coming Sunday might be a good time to catch and have brunch together in the city center. Would that be suitable for you?
I look forward to hearing from you soon to make the booking.
Your friend.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, nevertheless, so, then, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 26.3917525773 136% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1006.0 937.175257732 107% => OK
No of words: 220.0 206.0 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.57272727273 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71536795674 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 303.3 290.88556701 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.0148620497 44.8134815571 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.6 76.5299724578 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 16.8248392259 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.7 4.34317383033 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209133166301 0.216113520407 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109451886511 0.0766984524023 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.13234914289 0.0603063233224 219% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112341230162 0.12726935374 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0579995568342 0.0580467560999 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 8.37731958763 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.23 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.