You read a newspaper article that captured your attention Write letter to your friend and recommended reading the article Include the following in your letter Where and when the article was published What the article was about Why it is important that you

Essay topics:

You read a newspaper article that captured your attention.
Write letter to your friend and recommended reading the article. Include the following in your letter:

– Where and when the article was published
– What the article was about
– Why it is important that your friend reads it.

Dear Hope,

Hope you are doing okay...

Just writing this is to tell about an article published in the September edition of XYZ, the famous health magazine.

The content of the article suggests the ways of recovering from depression. It also covers how depression can exacerbate and consequent in the low immune system. In the last section, the author explains the importance of happiness and self-reliance and also explain how these emotional characteristics work as remedies for such diseases. Author provided a case study referring to a real story where a person suffered from depression because of his family demise in a road accident and how he has overcome the difficulties to get back into his normal life.

I know, since after your dad's sudden demise, you are also struggling with depression. I want you to read the article and give a try to the explained solution. Hopefully, We will get some benefits from the same. I have enclosed a copy of the article with this letter. In case you want, can apply for a monthly subscription of the magazine for you.

Let me know how it goes with you.

Cheers,
Sumit

Votes
Average: 8.9 (2 votes)
Essay Categories
IELTS Writing Task I - IELTS General Training

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 8, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...me know how it goes with you. Cheers, Sumit
^^^
Line 14, column 6, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...how it goes with you. Cheers, Sumit
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 942.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 192.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90625 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.731928469 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.645833333333 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 295.2 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.3996823868 44.8134815571 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.5 76.5299724578 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 4.34317383033 23% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232363325963 0.216113520407 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0770555117284 0.0766984524023 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0744017799018 0.0603063233224 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116597279615 0.12726935374 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.078668073414 0.0580467560999 136% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 8.37731958763 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 8.71597938144 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 8, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...me know how it goes with you. Cheers, Sumit
^^^
Line 14, column 6, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...how it goes with you. Cheers, Sumit
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 942.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 192.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90625 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.731928469 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.645833333333 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 295.2 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.3996823868 44.8134815571 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.5 76.5299724578 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 4.34317383033 23% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232363325963 0.216113520407 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0770555117284 0.0766984524023 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0744017799018 0.0603063233224 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116597279615 0.12726935374 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.078668073414 0.0580467560999 136% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 8.37731958763 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 8.71597938144 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

---------------------
Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.