You recently bought a piece of equipment for your work but it did not work.
Write a letter to the shop or company which supplied the equipment in your letter.
• Describe the problem with the equipment
• Explain how this problem is affecting your work
• Say what you want the shop or company to do
You should write at least 150 words.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this letter to draw your attention towards the CD writer I purchased from your shop two days back. I used this CD writer last night when I need to copy some of my official files on another CD, as soon as I used it, realized it's not working properly.
This CD writer is not able to copy my data to another CD, which will impact my work and reputation at front of the client. I have committed with my boss to complete my task before the deadline, but because of this CD writer issue, I am not able to make it.
I am requesting you to replace this item with a new, working CD writer in order to the fulfillment of my commitment. I am already running of time so can't wait till it will be fixed.
I look forward hearing from you regarding providing a new item to me.
Yours faithfully,
Pallavi
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 117, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...er to the fulfillment of my commitment. I am already running of time so cant wait...
^
Line 5, column 149, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...itment. I am already running of time so cant wait till it will be fixed. I look f...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... so cant wait till it will be fixed. I look forward hearing from you regarding...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, look, regarding, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 680.0 937.175257732 73% => OK
No of words: 158.0 206.0 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.30379746835 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.54539209256 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42136381486 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 127.690721649 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.620253164557 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 206.1 290.88556701 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.2329156289 44.8134815571 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.0 76.5299724578 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.75 16.8248392259 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 4.34317383033 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158559746784 0.216113520407 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0790493977887 0.0766984524023 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0582944854665 0.0603063233224 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0845718433279 0.12726935374 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0489496379552 0.0580467560999 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 8.37731958763 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 70.7449484536 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.66 8.71597938144 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.98 7.59969072165 92% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 41.2886597938 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.