Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? To improve the quality of education, universities should spend money on salaries university professors. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
I bet no one could deny that universities are responsible to provide best and skillful education to their students. Future of any county decided by the quality of education provided to their youth. Qualified generation could provide more innovative ideas to lead the development of their country. To provide the quality of education university have to recruit the best qualify professors and offer them the plenty amount of salary so they won’t attract towards any other profession. I personally, on belief professor should get high salary. To strengthen my statement I will pinpoint most outstanding reasons.
First of all, professors also the human beings. They also have their family responsibilities which they have to fulfill. Universities should provide the handsome salaries to professor so they can fulfill their responsibilities. We all does the study to get a good job with plenty amount of salary. Professors would be thinks same when they were in their study phase, so universities should spend more money on their salary to make them satisfactory towards their job and fostered them towards teaching profession. Professors doing the great and most respectful duty to spread their knowledge among the students, then why won't they should get good salary? After all these are the persons who are producing qualify engineers, and doctors for our country.
Secondly, teachers are the epitome of success for their students. Students try to imitate their knowledge and subtlety, so the teacher image should be idol. To encourage teachers toward their duty we should provide them the facilities so they gratify with their jobs. Job satisfaction stimulates a person mood. A person with healthy mind can reflects positive waves of energy towards their students as well as it attracts the students towards teaching profession and it will produce more number of elite youngsters. For example if elite students will opt teaching as their profession rather than to become an engineer or doctor, it will engender many other brilliant students who can contribute towards the development of country in various aspect like actor, engineer, delegates and many more.
To wrap it up, handsome salary is the need to sustain in today's world as people do not have only basic needs to fulfill but they have to maintain their status in society and fulfill their luxurious demands as well. Teachers also the part of society, they also have some expectations, so they also need hoard salary to attain their wishes. As I aforementioned some points which are sufficient to realize anyone about the demand of high salary of professors.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 236, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'We' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'do'
Suggestion: do
... fulfill their responsibilities. We all does the study to get a good job with plenty...
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Line 5, column 343, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'reflect'
Suggestion: reflect
...on mood. A person with healthy mind can reflects positive waves of energy towards their ...
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Line 7, column 341, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ed hoard salary to attain their wishes. As I aforementioned some points which are ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'if', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'then', 'well', 'after all', 'as to', 'for example', 'as well as', 'first of all']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.255411255411 0.229887763892 111% => OK
Verbs: 0.15367965368 0.158761421928 97% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0822510822511 0.0866891130778 95% => OK
Adverbs: 0.038961038961 0.046263068375 84% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0952380952381 0.0685040099705 139% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.101731601732 0.118717715034 86% => OK
Participles: 0.017316017316 0.0351676179071 49% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.75993970662 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0454545454545 0.0309702414327 147% => OK
Particles: 0.004329004329 0.00188951952338 229% => OK
Determiners: 0.0670995670996 0.0887237588012 76% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.034632034632 0.0209618222197 165% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.012987012987 0.0139019557991 93% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2634.0 2387.08602151 110% => OK
No of words: 423.0 408.028673835 104% => OK
Chars per words: 6.22695035461 5.86048508987 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53508145475 4.48200974243 101% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.39243498818 0.338922669872 116% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.300236406619 0.251872472559 119% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.198581560284 0.174417080927 114% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.130023640662 0.112833075102 115% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75993970662 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.51536643026 0.524397521467 98% => OK
Word variations: 58.1409465564 59.2087087015 98% => OK
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6684587814 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.2272727273 20.5533526081 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.1176569567 48.84282405 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.727272727 120.699889404 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2272727273 20.5533526081 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.636363636364 0.644075263715 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.54480286738 54% => OK
Readability: 49.2509133892 45.7405998639 108% => OK
Elegance: 1.3007518797 1.45489161554 89% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.331299034043 0.300154397459 110% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.114810450165 0.103427244359 111% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0888862008821 0.0752933317313 118% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.470229298258 0.497263757937 95% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.165586872305 0.151897553556 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127900526108 0.114077575197 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0606850959619 0.0781384742642 78% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.383376870505 0.336927656856 114% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0790704421123 0.067059652881 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.240565016858 0.210909579961 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0715792787155 0.0618886996521 116% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8870967742 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.86379928315 26% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.91756272401 102% => OK
Positive topic words: 11.0 8.42114695341 131% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.4623655914 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.75985663082 109% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 13.6433691756 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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