he widespread use of the internet has given people access to information on a level never experienced before. How does this increase in the availability
of information influence life in today's world?
This is the era of technology, information providing resources are playing a vital role in today's technology world. Internet is the most reliable and quickest way to get any information around the world, people's are just one click away from what they need to get. Internet accelerate the development of technologies and rate of invention. This play an imperative role in communication and media as well, now these days, we can approach any one around the world. Internet makes our life easy and convenient. Although, The use of internet is the matter of controversy among people of different age group and
different perspective. Some of them thinks internet is misguiding to teen age's, destruct them from their actual goal and the source of time wastage. On personal note, I believe internet is the source of information and the proper use of internet may land us on informative environment. To strengthen my opinion I will pinpoint some outstanding reason in upcoming paragraphs.
To begin with, the prerequisite to get the success in any field, a person should need to be updated about what happening around the world, and there is none other than internet, can provide this information so quickly. For instance, a businessman should know what latest technology in the market to accelerate the revenue, Internet is the best way to get the information as well as provide the platform to purchase the resources from any corner of the world via online shopping. Internet boost up the globalization, now people don't need to go on same place to purchase the things. for example, if a person is in India and need to buy the things from China, can do the online shopping without going to China. Internet makes the shopping feasible and convenient, it is cost saving as well as time saving. Here, we are not denying the fact, access and inappropriate use of internet for gaming and other adult content can be deleterious end, then it distract the person from his goal.
In addition, Internet is helpful in studies, shopping, and even we can connect the people who are far away from us, in low cost. Students can take the desired information in just one click for their project work as well as for their general studies. A person can do the online shopping without going out,it can be cost and time saving. Internet connect the people irrespective of their distances. For instance, My uncle is staying in America, he moved there long back, before the use of internet it is a challenging task to send any information to him so quick, although, after the use of internet we can send e-mail to him which takes couple of second to inform him any news. Now these days, many social networking sites are on the internet which are connecting people of different place, different culture and different professional.
At last, to wrap it up, availability of information due to internet make our life convenient and fulfill the gap of distance around the world. Appropriate use of internet have various advantages as I aforementioned, at the same time, wrong use of information provided by internet has a deleterious end.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 274, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'accelerates'.
Suggestion: accelerates
...ay from what they need to get. Internet accelerate the development of technologies and rat...
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Line 1, column 274, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (Internet) must be used with a third-person verb: 'accelerates'.
Suggestion: accelerates
...ay from what they need to get. Internet accelerate the development of technologies and rat...
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Line 1, column 437, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'anyone'?
Suggestion: anyone
...s well, now these days, we can approach any one around the world. Internet makes our li...
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Line 1, column 606, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... among people of different age group and different perspective. Some of them thin...
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Line 2, column 169, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rce of time wastage. On personal note, I believe internet is the source of inform...
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Line 4, column 260, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'what the latest'.
Suggestion: what the latest
...For instance, a businessman should know what latest technology in the market to accelerate ...
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Line 4, column 489, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (Internet) must be used with a third-person verb: 'boosts'.
Suggestion: boosts
...the world via online shopping. Internet boost up the globalization, now people dont n...
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Line 4, column 528, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... boost up the globalization, now people dont need to go on same place to purchase th...
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Line 4, column 582, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: For
...o on same place to purchase the things. for example, if a person is in India and ne...
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Line 4, column 813, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...saving as well as time saving. Here, we are not denying the fact, access and inappropriate use ...
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Line 4, column 947, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'distracts'?
Suggestion: distracts
...content can be deleterious end, then it distract the person from his goal. In additi...
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Line 6, column 304, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , it
...do the online shopping without going out,it can be cost and time saving. Internet c...
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Line 6, column 346, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'connects'.
Suggestion: connects
...t can be cost and time saving. Internet connect the people irrespective of their distan...
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Line 6, column 346, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (Internet) must be used with a third-person verb: 'connects'.
Suggestion: connects
...t can be cost and time saving. Internet connect the people irrespective of their distan...
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Discourse Markers used:
['if', 'may', 'second', 'so', 'then', 'well', 'as for', 'for example', 'for instance', 'in addition', 'as well as', 'to begin with']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.272108843537 0.229887763892 118% => OK
Verbs: 0.142857142857 0.158761421928 90% => OK
Adjectives: 0.062925170068 0.0866891130778 73% => OK
Adverbs: 0.047619047619 0.046263068375 103% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0493197278912 0.0685040099705 72% => OK
Prepositions: 0.12074829932 0.118717715034 102% => OK
Participles: 0.0289115646259 0.0351676179071 82% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.82390301377 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0340136054422 0.0309702414327 110% => OK
Particles: 0.00510204081633 0.00188951952338 270% => OK
Determiners: 0.0986394557823 0.0887237588012 111% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0221088435374 0.0209618222197 105% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0102040816327 0.0139019557991 73% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3114.0 2387.08602151 130% => OK
No of words: 528.0 408.028673835 129% => OK
Chars per words: 5.89772727273 5.86048508987 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.79356345386 4.48200974243 107% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.344696969697 0.338922669872 102% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.25 0.251872472559 99% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.202651515152 0.174417080927 116% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.119318181818 0.112833075102 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82390301377 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 252.0 212.727598566 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.477272727273 0.524397521467 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 56.2104182569 59.2087087015 95% => OK
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6684587814 111% => OK
Sentence length: 22.9565217391 20.5533526081 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.0988864966 48.84282405 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.391304348 120.699889404 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9565217391 20.5533526081 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.521739130435 0.644075263715 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.54480286738 252% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 47.9565217391 45.7405998639 105% => OK
Elegance: 1.75886524823 1.45489161554 121% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.431868890295 0.300154397459 144% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.09910479854 0.103427244359 96% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0775192033525 0.0752933317313 103% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.512763439654 0.497263757937 103% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.166566602797 0.151897553556 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.174868419741 0.114077575197 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0783088518972 0.0781384742642 100% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.410648251575 0.336927656856 122% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0865393879956 0.067059652881 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.321882520332 0.210909579961 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0269307464105 0.0618886996521 44% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8870967742 109% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.86379928315 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.91756272401 142% => OK
Positive topic words: 13.0 8.42114695341 154% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.4623655914 122% => OK
Neutral topic words: 7.0 2.75985663082 254% => OK
Total topic words: 23.0 13.6433691756 169% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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