Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is better to use printed material such as books and articles to do research than it is to use the internet. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer..
When students do the research for their class assignments they like to refer both books as well as internet, both are the sources of information and have their own advantages and disadvantages. As far as I am concerned, I will prefer and suggest using printed material rather than the internet. I believe printed material is more genuine and trustworthy. I feel this because of two reasons, which I will explain in following paragraphs to strengthen my opinion.
To begin with, the first point which deserves the attention is that the printed material is more reliable than the online resources. Material on the encyclopedia is not trustworthy because it can be added and edited by anyone, regardless their expertise and knowledge in the same field. Even some time, I heard that some people play with the online content and added, incorrect information in an online database as a mischievous behavior. As a result, sometime the information includes in an online resource is false and biased. My personal experience demonstrates the danger of relying heavily on online material. I was in my high school and had to complete my project of chemistry class. I cited data that I found in online resources without consulting of any text book references which turned out completely incorrect. The information which I included in my project was completely wrong and my teacher spotted it immediately, causing me to fail in that assignment. As a result, I got low grade in class by the end of the session. If I referred some good books on the same topic before submission of my assignment, it would not end up with my low grades.
In addition, books are superior to online materials because they provide the depth of information about required topic. The book contains the depth knowledge about a topic rather than online resources, which is useful for the readers of all ages. Moreover, the references provide by the books is more reliable and knowledgeable. I have personally experienced some benefits of referring the books while doing research. When I was in my undergraduate and had to submit a final project report. I completed my project after referring of many books and their references, which provided really depth knowledge about my topic. As a result, my project got many appreciations from professors as well as director of the college, furthermore, they choose it to represent in the college yearly exhibition. My personal experience demonstrates the value of referring the books while working on some projects or research.
Finally, in a word, owing to the aforementioned reasonable causes and elucidations described in previous paragraphs, it appears to be reasonable to draw a well founded conclusion that it's always better to refer to the printed material while working on research. The printed material is more reliable and contains depth knowledge about a topic rather than encyclopedia.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 89, Rule ID: BOTH_AS_WELL_AS[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
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Discourse Markers used:
['finally', 'first', 'furthermore', 'if', 'moreover', 'really', 'so', 'then', 'well', 'while', 'even so', 'i feel', 'in addition', 'as a result', 'as well as', 'to begin with']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.213051823417 0.229887763892 93% => OK
Verbs: 0.163147792706 0.158761421928 103% => OK
Adjectives: 0.084452975048 0.0866891130778 97% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0537428023033 0.046263068375 116% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0806142034549 0.0685040099705 118% => OK
Prepositions: 0.134357005758 0.118717715034 113% => OK
Participles: 0.042226487524 0.0351676179071 120% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.00133185487 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0249520153551 0.0309702414327 81% => OK
Particles: 0.00383877159309 0.00188951952338 203% => OK
Determiners: 0.0998080614203 0.0887237588012 112% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00767754318618 0.0209618222197 37% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0153550863724 0.0139019557991 110% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2907.0 2387.08602151 122% => OK
No of words: 476.0 408.028673835 117% => OK
Chars per words: 6.10714285714 5.86048508987 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67091256922 4.48200974243 104% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.378151260504 0.338922669872 112% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.313025210084 0.251872472559 124% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.228991596639 0.174417080927 131% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.155462184874 0.112833075102 138% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00133185487 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.470588235294 0.524397521467 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 53.4530167073 59.2087087015 90% => OK
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6684587814 116% => OK
Sentence length: 19.8333333333 20.5533526081 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.644875748 48.84282405 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.125 120.699889404 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8333333333 20.5533526081 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.666666666667 0.644075263715 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.54480286738 18% => OK
Readability: 51.1358543417 45.7405998639 112% => OK
Elegance: 1.30967741935 1.45489161554 90% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.360722471244 0.300154397459 120% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.109807993441 0.103427244359 106% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0608850797025 0.0752933317313 81% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.468499362893 0.497263757937 94% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.123021705496 0.151897553556 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134213054618 0.114077575197 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0715530298841 0.0781384742642 92% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.41652058017 0.336927656856 124% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.107872951014 0.067059652881 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.29324101785 0.210909579961 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0533369530508 0.0618886996521 86% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8870967742 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.86379928315 129% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.91756272401 163% => OK
Positive topic words: 9.0 8.42114695341 107% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.4623655914 122% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.75985663082 109% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 13.6433691756 110% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.