Your local council is considering closing a sport and leisure centre that it runs, in order to save money.
Write a letter to the local council, in your letter,
- Give details of how you and your friends or family use the centre.
- Explain the why the centre is important for the local community.
- Describe the possible effects on local people if the centre closed.
Dear Manager,
I am writing this letter to raise my concerned on the closing of the leisure and sports centre of our community 'The Hills Apartments' situated at Irving. At first, I would like to tell you, to visit this sports centre is the part of my routine activity in order to lead a healthy life. I and my family regularly visit sports centre to participate in different sports events has been organized by staff and management.
This sports centre is situated in our community so it is feasible to reach here without any commute. this is a booster of our community to lead a prosperous health. In addition, to participate in sports is the best way to utilise the leisure time of our children and homemaker girls.
I am humbly requesting you to think again about your decision of closing this sports centre as it will create the problem of our old age parents and children, as they can't go alone to another place without guardian, and it will have adverse effect on the health of community residents as their workout will be minimize.
looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Pallavi
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Suggestion: This
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...r old age parents and children, as they cant go alone to another place without guard...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Looking
...s as their workout will be minimize. looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 26.3917525773 133% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 932.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 195.0 206.0 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77948717949 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56403076823 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574358974359 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 288.9 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 82.5641538815 44.8134815571 184% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.555555556 76.5299724578 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6666666667 16.8248392259 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.55555555556 4.34317383033 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193811932932 0.216113520407 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0828648663522 0.0766984524023 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0470654300644 0.0603063233224 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0927740434144 0.12726935374 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0536628212104 0.0580467560999 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 8.37731958763 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 70.7449484536 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 8.71597938144 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.