You took your family to a nearby restaurant. You were disappointed with the meal and wish to complain to the manager.
Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant. In your letter
» explain why you were at the restaurant
» describe the problems
» write about the action you want the manager to take
Dear Sir/Madam,
My name is Pallavi and I am the regular customer of your restaurant, "The Great Indian Place", situated in Irving. I used to visit this restaurant for every family occasion and birthday celebrations.
Recently I visited this place two days back (on1st March '18) for the 3rd birthday celebration of my daughter. This time the buffet service is turned me upset because it was not up to mark as our expectation. The food in the buffet is not warm and delicious. While we complain to the front desk about the services and taste, we were not getting the satisfied response. As they told me they hired a new cook recently so it may be the change of taste but it was not convincing to us. For the cold food, they told they need to replace the warmer shortly. I can understand the warmer problem but overall these all issues ruined my party enjoyment.
I am requesting you to consider the issue and collect more feedback on cook service as it can impact the reputation of the restaurant and the equipment handling should be taken before any customer complaint.
I am looking forward any action from your side towards my complaint.
Yours faithfully,
Pallavi
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...taken before any customer complaint. I am looking forward any action from your...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, look, may, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 987.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 205.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81463414634 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69094146585 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.634146341463 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 298.8 290.88556701 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.5904199975 44.8134815571 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.25 76.5299724578 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0833333333 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.08333333333 4.34317383033 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.49484536082 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108780457859 0.216113520407 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0362583869242 0.0766984524023 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0350788942399 0.0603063233224 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0619606070275 0.12726935374 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0252936644197 0.0580467560999 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 8.37731958763 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 8.71597938144 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.