Do you agree or disagree with the following statement It is better to use printed material such as books and articles to do research than it is to use the internet Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
some people suggest that printed material as books, articles and journals are better than those in internet. After all, we can only trust in physical things, "they said". personally, I disagree with this idea and I will show reasons to support my opinion.
First of all, we can find so many resources of academic content just googling a key-word, anytime. Why look for only printed material? For my own experience, when I studied for master's degree, I used searching a lot about architecture by internet. And it was really usefull! Nowadays, magazines, journals, books and articles are available by just one click. Obviously, we have to be careful in terms of the credits and make sure that the content is true. Fake news are spreaded quicly.
Second, printed books, depending which of, are expensive for some part of population. Sometimes is better to have good wi-fi connection than spend money on specific books or other materials, because through internet we just have to pay a low tax to use, and invest our major gift: time! Minutes to search what we need. On the other hand, if you are a unwilling person, it is better forget the idea, because takes time to find the answer we want on internet.
Essencialy, there is a plausible reason to avoid printed material and prefer online resources. As mentioned, internet provides so much information, and the best thing about it is because it is free. free in part, as you pay for it montly. But, anyway, you don't need big amount of cash, just pleasure to find what you need.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Some
some people suggest that printed material as...
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Suggestion: Personally
...physical things, 'they said'. personally, I disagree with this idea and I will s...
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... show reasons to support my opinion. First of all, we can find so many resour...
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Suggestion: Is Sometimes
... expensive for some part of population. Sometimes is better to have good wi-fi connection th...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
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... we need. On the other hand, if you are a unwilling person, it is better forget t...
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Suggestion: Free
...t thing about it is because it is free. free in part, as you pay for it montly. But,...
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Suggestion: don't
...you pay for it montly. But, anyway, you dont need big amount of cash, just pleasure ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, but, first, if, look, really, second, so, after all, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 52.1666666667 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1282.0 1977.66487455 65% => OK
No of words: 265.0 407.700716846 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83773584906 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.48103885553 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58204220961 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 212.727598566 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.62641509434 0.524837075471 119% => OK
syllable_count: 398.7 618.680645161 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.5853851991 48.9658058833 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.125 100.406767564 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5625 20.6045352989 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 5.45110844103 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220015715659 0.236089414692 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0615762417255 0.076458572812 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0529383568851 0.0737576698707 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126706917717 0.150856017488 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0333736737187 0.0645574589148 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 86.8835125448 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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