Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Television .newspapers magazines and other media pay attention to the personal lives of famous people such as public figures and celebrities. use specific reasons and details to explain your opinion.
Famous people are the epitome of success, thanks to publicity they are getting from social media, it imitated by those who have desire of fame. They are widely adored by the people, but all of them not influence by them. Bearing the fact in mind a question that is a matter of debate a controversial whether social media cares about the famous people. Agreement is yet too reached on this issue. However, I am personally on belief that pay attention to the personal life of famous people may lead deleterious effect in other people especially to youngsters. In the below paragraphs I will pinpoint the most outstanding reason.
One reason is, in these days' public media and television just think about to gain profit and hoard of money. They are not bothering about what they are showing and how it will be affected to others. They just care about their TRP's. Glamour world and fantasy may engender to young generation in danger. For example for many people especially for teenagers famous people serve as an idol and public opinion. Indeed, well known people do not able to make a secret of alcohol or drugs abuse. Consequently, this may provide a fertile platform to youngsters. They think that there is nothing bad in alcohols or drugs and these are acceptable. Young children's influence from the public figure which is showing by media, they are not mature enough to distinguish between the fantasy and the realistic. Delving further into the issue reveal different kinds of disorder like short term relationship, drugs and alcohol.
Another important reason is also important as first one; if media continuously focus on the personal life of famous people it will jeopardize people's health. Broadly speaking, some time celebrity glamorized advertisement in hasty manner such as smoking and it can be the example of supporters everywhere that it is acceptable to smoke. In other word, destructive habits of celebrity are not only effect to physical and mental health of a person but they make them low in self esteem. Alongside, media have innumerable benefits, media is the fastest way of broadcasting a massage about different subjects but hardly had they broadcast anything without glamorization. Nevertheless, it does not make those preceding benefits.
To wrap it up, media care about well known people and their personal life for different purpose which can bring some bad consequences. As I aforementioned the reason, one sooner realize that too much attention to the personal life of celebrity's may lead deleterious cause. It may lead social disorder to youngsters and have adverse effect on the person's physically and mentally.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'affect'?
Suggestion: affect
...uctive habits of celebrity are not only effect to physical and mental health of a pers...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'consequently', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'nevertheless', 'so', 'well', 'broadly speaking', 'for example', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.251572327044 0.229887763892 109% => OK
Verbs: 0.138364779874 0.158761421928 87% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0964360587002 0.0866891130778 111% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0733752620545 0.046263068375 159% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0524109014675 0.0685040099705 77% => OK
Prepositions: 0.117400419287 0.118717715034 99% => OK
Participles: 0.0314465408805 0.0351676179071 89% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.74065966255 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0293501048218 0.0309702414327 95% => OK
Particles: 0.0020964360587 0.00188951952338 111% => OK
Determiners: 0.0733752620545 0.0887237588012 83% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.020964360587 0.0209618222197 100% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0125786163522 0.0139019557991 90% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2646.0 2387.08602151 111% => OK
No of words: 436.0 408.028673835 107% => OK
Chars per words: 6.06880733945 5.86048508987 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56953094068 4.48200974243 102% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.383027522936 0.338922669872 113% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.266055045872 0.251872472559 106% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.176605504587 0.174417080927 101% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.130733944954 0.112833075102 116% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74065966255 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 232.0 212.727598566 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.532110091743 0.524397521467 101% => OK
Word variations: 61.5360415684 59.2087087015 104% => OK
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6684587814 116% => OK
Sentence length: 18.1666666667 20.5533526081 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.2797396975 48.84282405 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.25 120.699889404 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1666666667 20.5533526081 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.541666666667 0.644075263715 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.54480286738 18% => OK
Readability: 44.7721712538 45.7405998639 98% => OK
Elegance: 1.51587301587 1.45489161554 104% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.364874876628 0.300154397459 122% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0751589191863 0.103427244359 73% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0529581478958 0.0752933317313 70% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.424655708681 0.497263757937 85% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.130603550888 0.151897553556 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119405270581 0.114077575197 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0651635109325 0.0781384742642 83% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.330021615372 0.336927656856 98% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0335327076474 0.067059652881 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.258100491705 0.210909579961 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0409021084235 0.0618886996521 66% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8870967742 109% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.86379928315 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.91756272401 81% => OK
Positive topic words: 7.0 8.42114695341 83% => OK
Negative topic words: 7.0 2.4623655914 284% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.75985663082 109% => OK
Total topic words: 17.0 13.6433691756 125% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 86.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.