At University and colleges, sports and social activities are just important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financials support. I am in favor of the statement sports and social activities are also same important as studies. Sports stimulate our brain and mood. Social activities and events lead our social development. Some of the perspective of the argument are as below.
Sports and social activities are also the part of education, students need to be grooms in field of sports as well as social activities with same manner as studies. Education providing us the theoretical knowledge, facts and reasons. At the same time sports and social activities providing us the platform to implement our thoughts and knowledge. Sports regulate our mood and makes our mind fresh. Best mood in study in is the relaxed mood and sports help our mind to become relaxed.
These days, in the schedule of busy and hectic life with the pressure of studies, sports provide us the opportunity to do the physical activity which lead to good health.
In addition, these days sports and cultural activities have bright future. student can lead their carrier toward the field of sports and can become a successful sports person if they could get the better resources in their colleges. Students who are interesting to become a sports person can get all the facility in college campus and they don't need to explore outside the competitive environment which is required for sports. It is helpful for them to built their carrier. I would like to add my person experience on it, one of my friend have good academics but he want to pursue his career in football. He could get admission in any reputed college but due to pursue his career in football he had chosen the college had football team and good facility.
To live in society students need to have social development which can be develop with social events or social activities. So if, colleges provide the opportunity of social activities in the college itself it auxiliary students in social development. In conclusion with my explanation i am in favor of giving same importance to sports and social activity in colleges as library and classes.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...late our mood and makes our mind fresh. Best mood in study in is the relaxed mood an...
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...cultural activities have bright future. student can lead their carrier toward the field...
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...d of sports and can become a successful sports person if they could get the better res...
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...of my friend have good academics but he want to pursue his career in football. He co...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'if', 'so', 'well', 'in addition', 'in conclusion', 'as well as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.297229219144 0.229887763892 129% => OK
Verbs: 0.136020151134 0.158761421928 86% => OK
Adjectives: 0.095717884131 0.0866891130778 110% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0151133501259 0.046263068375 33% => Some adverbs wanted.
Pronouns: 0.0730478589421 0.0685040099705 107% => OK
Prepositions: 0.120906801008 0.118717715034 102% => OK
Participles: 0.0201511335013 0.0351676179071 57% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.6755777917 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0352644836272 0.0309702414327 114% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0629722921914 0.0887237588012 71% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0201511335013 0.0209618222197 96% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0100755667506 0.0139019557991 72% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2205.0 2387.08602151 92% => OK
No of words: 369.0 408.028673835 90% => OK
Chars per words: 5.9756097561 5.86048508987 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38284983912 4.48200974243 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.40379403794 0.338922669872 119% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.260162601626 0.251872472559 103% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.20325203252 0.174417080927 117% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.127371273713 0.112833075102 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6755777917 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.468834688347 0.524397521467 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 49.0178439543 59.2087087015 83% => OK
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6684587814 97% => OK
Sentence length: 18.45 20.5533526081 90% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.5011827807 48.84282405 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.25 120.699889404 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.45 20.5533526081 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.4 0.644075263715 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.54480286738 162% => OK
Readability: 44.4662601626 45.7405998639 97% => OK
Elegance: 1.95505617978 1.45489161554 134% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.37050361011 0.300154397459 123% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.185854661751 0.103427244359 180% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.108794231603 0.0752933317313 144% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.5586925494 0.497263757937 112% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.168183634423 0.151897553556 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.167179644276 0.114077575197 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.135081944902 0.0781384742642 173% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.400180009162 0.336927656856 119% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.10816336324 0.067059652881 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.267539023552 0.210909579961 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.153335494286 0.0618886996521 248% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8870967742 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.86379928315 26% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.91756272401 81% => OK
Positive topic words: 13.0 8.42114695341 154% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.4623655914 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.75985663082 109% => OK
Total topic words: 16.0 13.6433691756 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.