Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? "In twenty years there will be fewer cars on the road than there are today."
Means of transportation for human beings has been changing rapidly through history. While, in twenty year there may be fewer car on road than today in my country, but the world tell the different story. In my opinion, the usage of cars will increase in coming twenty year than today. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in following paragraphs.
First aspect to deserve a word is that the developing world is urbanizing, which means that more people ever embark on a daily commute to reach their workplace. In past, most people engage in subsidence labor near to their home. In contrast, today people are more like to live in urban areas. The apartment that they inhabitant are usually far from their work place, which necessitates daily commute. For instance, my grandpa owned and worked in a rice farm which is hardly five miles away from his home. Occasionally he traveled short distance using pack animal, but the most part lived his entire life within the radius of five mile. On the other hand, we like to live a better life so we shifted to urban place and used to drive regularly thirty miles a day. All of my co-workers doing the same practice, which is a pretty big changes compared to past. I cannot see any indication that this trend will halt in near future.
Second, income are raising all over the world, which means in near future automobiles will be are affordable for more people. Now, people in developing countries like India and China can also afford to take a car. On contrary, in the past, owning a car was a privilege for rich people only. Now every other person wishes to own a car to maintain his status in society. It's my personal experience, at the time I didn't own my car, but get to work by carpooling with neighbor. However, it was my dream of owning a vehicle of my own. While it make financial sense to me to continue carpooling or taking public transport, I viewed car own ship as a symbol of affluence.
In addition, the price of car’s getting cheaper day by day. Usage of latest technology by automobile industry accomplished them to manufacture a car with high technology in low prices. Therefore, car is more reachable to middle class people as well.
In a word, owing to the aforementioned reasonable causes and elucidations described in previous paragraph, it appears to be reasonable to draw a well founded conclusion that in near future there will be more cars on road than today. This is because the world is rapidly urbanizing and car is affordable to more people.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean: 'In the past'?
Suggestion: In the past
...daily commute to reach their workplace. In past, most people engage in subsidence labor...
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Line 5, column 370, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
... car to maintain his status in society. Its my personal experience, at the time I d...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...s my personal experience, at the time I didnt own my car, but get to work by carpooli...
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Line 7, column 72, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'of the latest'.
Suggestion: of the latest
...pos;s getting cheaper day by day. Usage of latest technology by automobile industry accom...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'second', 'so', 'therefore', 'well', 'while', 'for instance', 'i feel', 'in addition', 'in contrast', 'in my opinion', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.24254473161 0.229887763892 106% => OK
Verbs: 0.157057654076 0.158761421928 99% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0894632206759 0.0866891130778 103% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0457256461233 0.046263068375 99% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0576540755467 0.0685040099705 84% => OK
Prepositions: 0.131212723658 0.118717715034 111% => OK
Participles: 0.0457256461233 0.0351676179071 130% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.60445066479 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0397614314115 0.0309702414327 128% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0735586481113 0.0887237588012 83% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0159045725646 0.0209618222197 76% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0119284294235 0.0139019557991 86% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2541.0 2387.08602151 106% => OK
No of words: 448.0 408.028673835 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.671875 5.86048508987 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60065326758 4.48200974243 103% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.299107142857 0.338922669872 88% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.198660714286 0.251872472559 79% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.147321428571 0.174417080927 84% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.109375 0.112833075102 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60445066479 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 249.0 212.727598566 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555803571429 0.524397521467 106% => OK
Word variations: 66.4586616654 59.2087087015 112% => OK
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6684587814 121% => OK
Sentence length: 17.92 20.5533526081 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.9494400486 48.84282405 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.64 120.699889404 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.92 20.5533526081 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.68 0.644075263715 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.54480286738 72% => OK
Readability: 37.7860714286 45.7405998639 83% => OK
Elegance: 1.6106870229 1.45489161554 111% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255598990296 0.300154397459 85% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0972200136622 0.103427244359 94% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0735004870392 0.0752933317313 98% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.447102283304 0.497263757937 90% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.131902264175 0.151897553556 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0829231720267 0.114077575197 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0848927342457 0.0781384742642 109% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.279070432826 0.336927656856 83% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0448590191524 0.067059652881 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173283183332 0.210909579961 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0869562150495 0.0618886996521 141% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8870967742 109% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.86379928315 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.91756272401 244% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 11.0 8.42114695341 131% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.4623655914 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 8.0 2.75985663082 290% => OK
Total topic words: 19.0 13.6433691756 139% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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