In many countries, supermarkets have caused small shops to close down. Is this having more advantages or more disadvantages?
Many believe that the supermarket boom forced to closed many local shops, this is the disadvantage to them. Although, other think they contributed to the national and international economy. This contentious statement has ignited the spark of hot discussion among many. I personally, in favor of supermarket and will provide the justification and evidence to validate my view.
To embark upon, supermarket boosts the economy to create more job opportunity. they are the massive stores so they increase the employment of the society and providing job help the local economy. Since they attract large customers, the area surrounding them tend to develop in order to own customer activity. it is uncommon for the supermarket to bring the infrastructure development, the prices of property are comparatively high if any supermarket store in their vicinity. This is the positive impact of the super market.
In addition, they made the shopping stress free and hassle-less. A customer can get most of the required items under one roof, which is time and cost saving. Allow me to elaborate this statement for better comprehension with an example. Before the concept of the supermarket, we need to go different stores for milk and bread, now we can get all the items in one place.
On the flip side, due to the supermarket, many local shops declined as big giant supermarket propelled some of them to shut down. The small local store can't compete them in term of cost and infrastructure. Consequently, they are responsible for the depletion of employment of small shop owners.
In a word, owing to the aforementioned reasonable causes and elucidation statement described in above paragraph, it appears to be reasonable to draw a founded conclusion that supermarket helping to boost the economy and employment; but at the same time, they force the small stores to shut down.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, if, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1572.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15409836066 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0621160477 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583606557377 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 503.1 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 54.2468406747 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.4705882353 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9411764706 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.23529411765 7.06120827912 32% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209903979474 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0613285720285 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0619860491869 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11075059059 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0453400841763 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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