You recently bought some food at a supermarket, but, when you got home, you found that the food was in bad condition. Write a letter to the manager of the supermarket, in your letter,
explain what happened to you
give details of the day and time of the purchase
ask the manager what he/she intends to do about your experience.
Dear manager,
I am writing this letter to tell you about my personal experience in your supermarket which wasn't so pleasant and the food I bought was rotten.
On Wednesday, I planned to buy weekly grocery from your shop around 2;00 pm which I did. I have bought a wide range variety of items such as stir fry vegetables, pasta, fish and meat as well. Next day, when i came to home from the work I intend to make a delicious pasta to fulfill my cravings but when i opened the packet of vegetables I was shocked to see the fungus as well as rotten vegetables inside the packet and i couldn't prepare anything to end the everlasting craving.
I have been a regular shopper from your supermarket for past 2 years and this thing never happened to me before so I am looking forward for the refund for the item and something kind of proper action from your management team to look into this matter because I don't want to repeat this kind of experience again.
I am waiting for your positive response on this particular issue.
kind regards,
Bilal Ali.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 208, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
..., fish and meat as well. Next day, when i came to home from the work I intend to ...
^
Line 7, column 254, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'delicious pasta'.
Suggestion: delicious pasta
... to home from the work I intend to make a delicious pasta to fulfill my cravings but when i opene...
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Line 7, column 304, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...s pasta to fulfill my cravings but when i opened the packet of vegetables I was s...
^
Line 7, column 416, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...l as rotten vegetables inside the packet and i couldn apos;t prepare anything to ...
^^
Line 7, column 422, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...otten vegetables inside the packet and i couldn apos;t prepare anything to end t...
^
Line 19, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Kind
...response on this particular issue. kind regards, Bilal Ali.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, look, so, well, kind of, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 893.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 195.0 206.0 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.57948717949 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44705138616 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625641025641 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 273.6 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 16.3608247423 165% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 105.089660456 44.8134815571 235% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 127.571428571 76.5299724578 167% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.8571428571 16.8248392259 166% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 4.34317383033 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166174442523 0.216113520407 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0660423832224 0.0766984524023 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0851550172464 0.0603063233224 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109302940917 0.12726935374 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101626321964 0.0580467560999 175% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 8.37731958763 168% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 7.45979381443 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.58 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 8.54432989691 150% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.