You recently celebrated a special occasion in your personal life and received a card and a present from your colleagues at work. Write a letter to your colleagues. In your letter
• remind your colleagues what the special occasion you were celebrating was
• thank them for the card and gift
• explain why you like the gift and how you will use it
Dear Eva and John,
I am writing to express my gratitude for sending me the best wishes in terms of card and beautifully wrapped gift on my wedding anniversary.
In regards to the occasion, it was my first wedding anniversary, we successfully completed 1 year with lot of roller coaster rides in our married life. Due to Covid-19 situation we just invited our close relatives to make our event little special. Moreover, there was guidelines from council to invite just 20 people and not to make big gatherings.
As for the gift, I really like the musical card that that you have sent. Also, the matter written in the card is meaningful. Not only the card but also the choice of gift is awesome. The black colored rollex wrist watch is incredible and looks dam pretty. Its dazzling dial gives smart look and the studs engraved on the dial makes it unique. I must say the choice of gift is fantastic. I will wear this watch on my formal meetings and while meeting niche people.
I would like to thank you once again for your extravagant gift and charming card.
Best Regards,
Urvashi
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: Regarding; With regard to
...pped gift on my wedding anniversary. In regards to the occasion, it was my first wedding a...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 49, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: that
...he gift, I really like the musical card that that you have sent. Also, the matter written...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...etings and while meeting niche people. I would like to thank you once again for ...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, moreover, really, so, while, as for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 906.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 193.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69430051813 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47160578097 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.663212435233 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 270.9 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.8394302971 44.8134815571 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.6923076923 76.5299724578 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8461538462 16.8248392259 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.84615384615 4.34317383033 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.101299883357 0.216113520407 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0317557236606 0.0766984524023 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0441328880658 0.0603063233224 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0706615322877 0.12726935374 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0576291905893 0.0580467560999 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 8.37731958763 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.33 8.71597938144 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.