You recently did a short cookery course. The cookery school asked for your feedback on this course.
Write a letter to the course director at the cookery school. In your letter
. describe what you enjoyed about the course.
. say how much cooking you've done since the course
. suggest another cookery course you'd like school to offer.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter with a warm feedback about the wonderful Chinese cooking techniques your school ‘kitchen Express’ taught me in the June 2020 crash coarse batch.
Firstly, due to recent corona pandemic I had lots of leisure time and I want something to work with in my leisure time so I joined your school to cook. Certainly, I was a fresher in Chinese cuisine. However, I was allocated teaching under the guidance of your freshy volunteer Mrs. Velma Fernandes.
Secondly, I would like to thank you for providing me a fantastic guide who taught me every Chinese cuisine in just one month. In addition, recently in one function when I cooked some meal, I got a great positive response.
To summarise, I would like you to have one South Indian cuisine coarse batch in next month so that I can learn that as well.
I am looking forward for your optimistic response.
Yours faithfully,
Sunny Mehta
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, look, second, secondly, so, well, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 778.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 162.0 206.0 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8024691358 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59547165244 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.672839506173 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 235.8 290.88556701 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.4078119391 44.8134815571 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.4444444444 76.5299724578 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 16.8248392259 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.77777777778 4.34317383033 179% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172765763797 0.216113520407 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0562415720625 0.0766984524023 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0422695487245 0.0603063233224 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0874952501522 0.12726935374 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0411428826 0.0580467560999 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 8.37731958763 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.26 8.71597938144 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.