You recently encountered some problems with public transportation service in your area Write a letter to the manager of the public transport company and say Where and what were the problems Explain how these problems affect the public Suggest what changes

Essay topics:

You recently encountered some problems with public transportation service in your area. Write a letter to the manager of the public transport company and say

– Where and what were the problems?
– Explain how these problems affect the public.
– Suggest what changes could be made to improve the situation.

Dear sir or madam,
I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with one of the public transportation sercives where I live.

Let me tell you what happened, on Monday the 25th of November I was waitng the metro at 8:00 am to commute to work. However, surprisingly not only the metro did not arrive at the time it was supposed to arrive at, but also it was late for an hour.

As a result, to this, the station got extremely crowded, to the extent that there were not enough room to stand comfortably. Consequently, all the passengers were late to their work, as well as, students were late to their schools, in addition, some students who had their mid-term exams on that day did not make it on time.

I have been using the metro for five years now; this was the first time that I encountered such problem. Since, punctuality is the most important attributes in the metro, therefore I would like to suggest that if something similar happened in the future, it would be better to inform the passengers beforehand, hence, the decide whether to wait or find another convenient mean of transportation.

Yours faithfully,
Mirna Milad

Votes
Average: 6.7 (4 votes)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 319, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...nform the passengers beforehand, hence, the decide whether to wait or find another conveni...
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Line 11, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ation. Yours faithfully, Mirna Milad
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, hence, however, if, so, therefore, well, in addition, as a result, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 945.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 199.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74874371859 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80339864513 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.663316582915 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 289.8 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 16.3608247423 147% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.2618411213 44.8134815571 159% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.125 76.5299724578 154% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.875 16.8248392259 148% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.625 4.34317383033 314% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137747364411 0.216113520407 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0546264431238 0.0766984524023 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0576351773383 0.0603063233224 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0870535294892 0.12726935374 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0787694088455 0.0580467560999 136% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 8.37731958763 160% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 70.7449484536 79% => It means the essay is relatively harder to read.
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 7.45979381443 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 8.71597938144 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 8.54432989691 136% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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