You recently encountered some problems with public transportation service in your area. Write a letter to the manager of the public transport company and say
What were the problems
Explain how these problems affect the public
Suggest what changes could be made to improve the situation
Write your answer in at least 150 words and start it from:
Dear Sir/Madame,
I am writing this letter in regards to the problems faced by me and other passengers while using Green bus in sector 29, New Delhi.
There are various problem I would like to share with you. The driver was rash driving despite of telling him multiple times to drive in a smooth manner by the passengers. Another issue was with the seats of the bus, maximum number of seats were broken and not in usable condition.
Passengers had faced lot of inconvenience due to this as an old man got injured due to rash driving by the driver. In addition, first aid kit was also not available in the bus. Thankfully, some fellow passenger was having some ointment which helped the old man. Maximum passengers were standing due to poor condition of seats, and many passengers were senior citizens who faced lot of discomfort.
I am suggesting possible changes which can prevent such incidents from happening again. There should be proper training of drivers before taking them on board for work. In other words, a proper code of conduct should be in place which should be followed by them. Furthermore, renovation of buses can be really helpful as it is very troublesome for the passengers to stand for entire journey.
I look forward for a positive update from your end.
Yours faithfully
Rina Arora
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 26, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
...Sir/Madame, I am writing this letter in regards to the problems faced by me and other pass...
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Line 3, column 104, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (Green) must be used with a third-person verb: 'buses', 'busses'.
Suggestion: buses; busses
... and other passengers while using Green bus in sector 29, New Delhi. There are v...
^^^
Line 5, column 19, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'problems'?
Suggestion: problems
...tor 29, New Delhi. There are various problem I would like to share with you. The dri...
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Line 5, column 134, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a smooth manner" with adverb for "smooth"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... of telling him multiple times to drive in a smooth manner by the passengers. Another issue was wi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, look, really, so, while, in addition, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.48453608247 174% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 32.9175257732 43% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 26.3917525773 140% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1103.0 937.175257732 118% => OK
No of words: 226.0 206.0 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88053097345 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55091853473 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 127.690721649 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.650442477876 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 332.1 290.88556701 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.711939991 44.8134815571 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.7857142857 76.5299724578 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1428571429 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.57142857143 4.34317383033 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.49484536082 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112893629589 0.216113520407 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0396973603391 0.0766984524023 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.037309761436 0.0603063233224 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0584256061207 0.12726935374 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.023902315715 0.0580467560999 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 8.37731958763 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 8.71597938144 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 41.2886597938 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.