You recently forgot or lost your Student ID card and now write to the academic officer for a replacement. You should write:
How you lost it
How is it affecting your activities at university
What you require him to do
Dear Sir,
I am a student at your university studying Mechanical Engineering and my academic identification number is 011580. Recently, I came back to campus on train from my hometown and unfortunately my student card has either been stolen or misplaced. I have filed a general diary regarding this matter and informed the security of the university’s estate office.
The ID card was unique and it used to provide me access to the university’s library, gym, cafeteria as well as parking on campus. Furthermore, many of my online accounts are linked with the personal pin number which was written on the card. In addition to this, the university exam is approaching and without the ID card, I may not be able to sit for the assessments. All in all, I am in a critical situation and need your assistance with this matter.
Therefore, I hope you understand my situation and by verifying the documents that I have sent you through the email, please issue a new card with the credentials and bar code so that I can access the different student services both on and off campus. Please contact me at the number 8801617598929 if you require any more information.
Yours truthfully,
Tahmeed Rahman
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I am a student at your university studyi...
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Line 17, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ore information. Yours truthfully, Tahmeed Rahman
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, may, regarding, so, therefore, well, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1018.0 937.175257732 109% => OK
No of words: 204.0 206.0 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99019607843 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12554109118 2.54303337028 123% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.647058823529 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 317.7 290.88556701 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.3893118871 44.8134815571 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.8 76.5299724578 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4 16.8248392259 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.7 4.34317383033 177% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211494800557 0.216113520407 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0770957972089 0.0766984524023 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0486787647353 0.0603063233224 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131189231861 0.12726935374 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0476213573012 0.0580467560999 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 8.37731958763 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 70.7449484536 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 8.71597938144 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 41.2886597938 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 8.62886597938 139% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.