you recently had a holiday visiting your friends and you stayed in their house

Essay topics:

you recently had a holiday visiting your friends and you stayed in their house.

Dear Madhav,

I’m writing this letter to thank you for the comfortable stay provided by your family during my holidays visit to your house. I thoroughly enjoyed my stay with my family especially the dishes made by your wife. The places near your town was simply spectacular and it has nice resorts to spend overnight.

Also, we had a wonderful time spent together talking about our childhood memories and meeting our old friends. The temples around your places gives an excellent ambiance and it’s an added advantage to your home. We visited Shiva temple which is approximately 100 miles away from your house with the beach around it. To be honest, it’s one of the most beautiful place that we ever visited in the past 10 years.

The speech given by your grandma about the truths of the life and the comments made by us was the funniest moment. The night walk on the beaches, the games played with our kids & the photos taken during our visits was some unforgettable events.

Along with this letter, I have sent few photos that we took during our visits and I’m happy to share with you. Meet you soon during our next holidays.

Yours faithfully,
Arumoh

Votes
Average: 8.4 (40 votes)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 274, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... temple which is approximately 100 miles away from your house with the beach arou...
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Line 5, column 302, Rule ID: NOUN_AROUND_IT[1]
Message: Consider using 'the surrounding beach'?
Suggestion: the surrounding beach
...ly 100 miles away from your house with the beach around it. To be honest, it's one of the mos...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, talking about

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 988.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 203.0 206.0 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86699507389 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34377298784 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.660098522167 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 290.7 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 0.824742268041 606% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.9927391002 44.8134815571 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.3333333333 76.5299724578 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9166666667 16.8248392259 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.25 4.34317383033 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24771588282 0.216113520407 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0890211572865 0.0766984524023 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0779664872788 0.0603063233224 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139868307808 0.12726935374 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0796447896183 0.0580467560999 137% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 8.37731958763 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.67 8.71597938144 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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