You recently had an issue with water leaking at your rental property. Write a letter to your landlord to complain about the problem and say
– When did it happen?
– Describe the problem.
– Suggest what could be done about it.
Dear Mr Matt,
I am writing this letter to bring the concern in front of you about the issue with water leakage of kitchen tap. Moreover, tap will break due to the pressure. Problem suddenly started a day after when we moved in. it seems to me that this issue existed before.
More on the Trouble. While checking under the line, i found the root cause. Middle section of the pipe looks in very bad condition and i can see the hole because of rust. I had to relocate all the kitchen stuff which is now suffering my daily chore.
Certainly, pipe is old so has and i recommend it to be replaced with new. For temporary solution, Better to lay down the rubber pipe lane so i can setup everything in kitchen.
Therefore, I would say that do something without any delay to avoid devastating circumstances with leakage in the house.
I hope you will take prompt action about the issue.
Yours Sincerely
Anshul
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 53, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...Trouble. While checking under the line, i found the root cause. Middle section of...
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Line 4, column 136, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...he pipe looks in very bad condition and i can see the hole because of rust. I ha...
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Line 4, column 252, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... which is now suffering my daily chore. Certainly, pipe is old so has and i reco...
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Line 6, column 35, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... Certainly, pipe is old so has and i recommend it to be replaced with new. F...
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Line 6, column 142, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ter to lay down the rubber pipe lane so i can setup everything in kitchen. Th...
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Line 6, column 144, Rule ID: CAN_SETUP[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can set up'?
Suggestion: can set up
...r to lay down the rubber pipe lane so i can setup everything in kitchen. Therefore, I...
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Line 14, column 7, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... the issue. Yours Sincerely Anshul
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, moreover, so, therefore, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 758.0 937.175257732 81% => OK
No of words: 165.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.59393939394 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39264253327 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.715151515152 0.622605031667 115% => OK
syllable_count: 234.0 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.7235145173 44.8134815571 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 58.3076923077 76.5299724578 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.6923076923 16.8248392259 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.76923076923 4.34317383033 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.49484536082 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180569469515 0.216113520407 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0494715630319 0.0766984524023 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0544084868946 0.0603063233224 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0745138003897 0.12726935374 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0605709241996 0.0580467560999 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.5 8.37731958763 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.45 8.71597938144 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 8.62886597938 58% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.