You recently had an issue with water leaking at your rental property. Write a letter to your landlord to complain about the problem and say– When did it happen?– Describe the problem.– Suggest what could be done about it.

Essay topics:

You recently had an issue with water leaking at your rental property. Write a letter to your landlord to complain about the problem and say

– When did it happen?
– Describe the problem.
– Suggest what could be done about it.

Dear Mr. John,

I am writing to bring to your attention a leakage problem with my kitchen tap at my rental flat.

I have been a resident over 10 years at flat number 27 in your owned building on North Road, and I have never had reason to complain to you before.

My annual leave was due, therefore I traveled out of the city for almost one month. When I returned home last week, I have noticed a heavy drops of water from one of the kitchen tap. I have ensured to close the main water service connection before my travelling, but the leakage has tremendously occurred.

Two main taps are available in the kitchen, and the only one which is for the washing machine was leaking. I could only assume that its assembly with the machine`s hose became extremely loose; however it was recently fixed. Either its size is incorrect or its model is wrong and does not sustain the high pressure.

I have comprehensive contract with your company, and my contract states that all damaged items are covered. hence, I would ask that you report the problem connection of the termination to your company plumber to come for tap checking. If it is damaged, he should replace with a new tap.

I look forward to the problem being resolved.

Yours sincerely,

Ayoub

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 11, column 109, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Hence
...tes that all damaged items are covered. hence, I would ask that you report the proble...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, look, so, therefore

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1050.0 937.175257732 112% => OK
No of words: 224.0 206.0 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6875 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52271251709 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 127.690721649 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.642857142857 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 324.9 290.88556701 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.463917525773 862% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.205262753 44.8134815571 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.7692307692 76.5299724578 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2307692308 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.38461538462 4.34317383033 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 7.41237113402 13% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 1.49484536082 602% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216064409157 0.216113520407 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0729139730511 0.0766984524023 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0512116703162 0.0603063233224 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111704289817 0.12726935374 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0478673929727 0.0580467560999 82% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 8.37731958763 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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